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My Second Chance In The Real World
Fantasy · Nemo_404
Nevermind, definitely is supposed to be written this way
Prolog - how it all began (part 1)
Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
Is the word Prologue supposed to be written this way?
Prolog - how it all began (part 1)
Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
Good, for the first 11 chapters. Writing is good, grammar is good. not much else to say currently
There's Richard
Ryan and Professor Kal both turned to look at their four companions. Laura, Ben, and Richard were all staring on silently, Laura had seen the devil worm before on that horrible night she wished she could forget forever, Ben had been told by Ryan about its existence, and Richard, as quiet as always, stared on with wide eyes. Professor Treffle on the other hand, was very vocal in her astonishment.
Professor Kal
Fantasy · Mungknut
Where's Richard? I thought Ben, Laura, Ryan and Richard came. Pretty sure Kal even makes Richard and Laura set up tent.
Not much to say, just want the book to get picked. There's just too little to criticise or praise. It seems good if you like the concept of this book.
Scars is a plural form of the word scar, so you have to use plural forms of verbs in conjubction with it. I suggest you put your chapter onto a grammar checker like grammarly, so you can see if there are any grammar mistakes and correct them. Sometimes it might highlight things that aren't mistakes though.
Also, any difference between this and "Princess' Guardian's Memories"?
Thrust -> trust
My Second Chance In The Real World
Fantasy · Nemo_404