Thanks for the support, and there is a new chapter now.
No and I am back.
I wasn't when you asked the question but I am now so here we are.
No, there will not be a harem. There will only be one person that he marries, and there will not be mistresses either. Other nobles might have them but I do not intend to have mistresses for Braydon.
You said that you thought it would be a trash harem novel with lolis but then want me to add meaningless story features that are typical of trash harem novels with lolis. This is a kingdom building novel, not an isekai.
Just to note on that point, Mireille is not from Barakhil. War with the empire might well happen, but not because of this.
I am dealing with some irl stuff right now as well as a helpful dose of writer's block. Mainly the writer's block.
Very insight, much wow. It is almost as good as my shameless review.
Your 1st and 4th points are the same, no map. And having a map takes time and/or money to make. Something that has been partially solved already since it has been a long time since I wrote chapter 13. There is a map in the discord and on the kofi page that I link to at the end of every chapter. Your 2nd point is a fair critique assuming that I intended to make an infallible character not someone who had literally just inherited his land on chapter 1, he will be reliant on those around him. If it is the matter of them being guests that you are critiquing then I can only say we have a difference of opinion on what a flaw is. Your 5th point should not even be a point at all if you have read even the synopsis of the story. No, he is not.
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original Viscount's Rise
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With his father dead and his brother inheriting the earldom, Braydon sets out to inherit the family’s neglected title, Viscount of Cliforge, the only land of the Kingdom on the other side of the Brimstone Mountains. His new lands are on the border that is held peaceful by an uneasy truce and the same lands that claimed his father’s life on the battlefield. With no reputation in noble society and no military might to speak of he will be a long way from challenging his brother whose land is some of the most prosperous in the empire, and has the backing of their younger brother, who has the smarts to raise their position even further. Will he become another casualty to the lands that have already claimed his father, or become something more as he climbs his way to prominence? At least he can be sure that his brother would never see him rise peacefully, and the neighbouring Grand Duke desires the last territory of the kingdom on the eastern side of the mountains. His position is anything but stable, he will do anything to change that and build his realm. Chapters are posted every other day at 11am/pm in whatever timezone webnovel's servers are Thanks to BriarRose for making the cover art!269 Chs 1.6k Collections
I have played both warband and bannerlord so probably in some measure.
Gerald was right, looking after the two of them was too much like hard work. There were way too many pickpockets for his liking, it did not help that they were by far the most lavishly dressed people in the market by far. Even if neither one of them liked to dress fancily, that was by noble standards. By a common pickpocket's standards they looked like they were dressed in denars, gold denars.
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