why are several paragraphs repeating
wish the story lasted a little longer but a great read overall
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really good story one of the best I've read in a long time the only thing that author might need to change is that two of the characters have the exact same name sometimes sometimes it's hard to differentiate between them
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yes she does
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This story just gets better and better every time you think the story will hit it's peak it surpasses it. this is one of the best story's on this site a must read.
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Reborn As a Pirate
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