I like how you started the story and am kinda disapointed it has stoped beeing updated. I and probably many other people would be delighted for it to be continiued.
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Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
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Anime & Comics · The_Sheep
Third person seams detached so maybe for sidecharacters but keep it in thirst for the mcs
Q4) Is writing in POV's to your liking or should I try third person point of view?
Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
Its a little dark but fits perfectly
Q2) Is the plot and character development enjoyable or not?
Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
Its an amazing story and really well writen
Q1) Are you enjoying this novel and the story line as it is proceeding? (You are free to shower your praises if you feel like doing it)
Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
Delay the heartbeat and tada a corps
Delay. It allows her to delay everything within a range of 2 meters around her. Simple usage, but powerful nevertheless.
Anime & Comics · Spirits_everywhere
What kinda speedy-ass child birth is common were you are from mate. 2-10h is normal.