Her > He Hah. Foreshadowing.
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Glad u asked > I’m glad you asked… Shortcuts in a story isn’t good if the story isn’t 1. a chat fic or 2. a crackfic. This book is neither. No u, ur, r, lol or the likes unless you want to make a reader huff a chuckle. 🛒 “I am Lilith Origami, and also your savour” > “My name’s Lilith Origami. I’m the one who saved you,”
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Fantasy · DymenS
Naw man, angels gotta read your soul number and register you into purgatory. I should know. It happened to my pal patrick.
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Fantasy · DymenS
Man’s momentarily became a cartoon character
Like a bird, the man was sent flying face first into a tree, splattering blood against the tree trunk.
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Fantasy · DymenS
That looks like a terminology used on human androids who’ve had their database on emotions wiped. Pretty neat comparison
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Fantasy · DymenS
Show them your power kevin my boi 😤
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Fantasy · DymenS
Nice spawning point bro 💃👌
Walking out, he was nearly blinded by the light coming from the sun. He was previously in a cave which explained why his surroundings were so dark. Looking at the environment, he stood on top of a mountain heavily engulfed by snow. The mountain he stood on provided a beautiful view of the area, as far as his eyes could see he was in a mountainous area all covered in snow. From the top, he could also make out an abundance of trees suffering the same fate.
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Fantasy · DymenS
Yet still a lone man > Yet, no matter the power he possesses, he is still a lone man. A mortal man at that. Alas, not even his mortal body could handle his power… > His mortal body couldn’t handle the full extent of his powers; as a consequence, his body tragically eroded away. I like the consequence for having too much power as a mortal. If he were a god or something, I’d understand but since he isn’t, death or the equivalent of it -erosion- is logical. Cool. R. I. P. Lone Man
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Fantasy · DymenS
Fascinating. If this were a political-based story, this man’s bloodline would be a major weapon for whatever planet/place he’s aligned himself with.
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Fantasy · DymenS
What a strange way to begin a conversation.
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