Roosterbee

Roosterbee

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I like to read novels, mostly fantasy. Western and eastern alike.

2018-08-19 Joint Global
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Roosterbee
Roosterbee
7 days ago
Commented

She kind of did lie since she isn’t who she said she is.

Kinvara revealed a soft, composed smile, the one that spoke of secrets and power. "The Lord of Light seeks only to bring his warmth, my lord," she said, her voice honeyed. "No harm shall come to those who respect his grace. Only those who disrespect the One God, no matter if King or peasant will be judged. I am Nyra, a close confidant of Kinvara, the Heart of Fire. So please rest assured, someone like me is not in allegiance with any of the Five Kings," she didn't lie. I wasn't one of the Five Kings. "I'm simply having a pilgrimage to King's Landing in the hope of spreading the Lord's name."

Game of Thrones: Reign of the Dragonking

Game of Thrones: Reign of the Dragonking

TV · Master4thWall

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
9 days ago
Replied to Kirozen

Crouch that is disguised as Moody I think.

"Not really" I said in a casual tone. "I don't think its any of the other student in Hogwarts or any of the students in the other schools, but that still leaves a lot of people to narrow down."

Harry Potter : The Archmage Awakens

Harry Potter : The Archmage Awakens

Book&Literature · Eternal97

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
21 days ago
Commented

Disregarding how that should help in any way, why use himself like this? I’m lost haha

"What if..." I began, pacing the room as the thought formed in my head. "What if I used myself as a silencer?"

World Hopping With Gacha

World Hopping With Gacha

Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
2 months ago
Commented

No ideas, just a pat on the shoulder. I expected a relatively short story without much to write about. But his backstory and interactions were very nice to read that I get pretty absorbed in most of the chapters. His introspection and seeing the change he leaves behind at points is well done. It’s nice there’s some skilled writing between all those ai assisted stories and translations. I’d even prefer some bad but original writing compared to the aforementioned.

Share any thoughts or ideas you may have for the story, they really help, trust me.

A Song of Grace & Fury

A Song of Grace & Fury

Book&Literature · Bleap

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
2 months ago
Commented

Surely that sounds like MJ’s pov. Lol

Liz was the epitome of the popular cheerleader, with her perfect brown hair cascading down her back, and her body was that of the ideal athlete, complete with large breasts that could easily envelop a big cock.

Marvel: Spider-Man - Potential Unleashed (Peter Si)

Marvel: Spider-Man - Potential Unleashed (Peter Si)

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
2 months ago
Replied to Depression_Anxiety

Author is into bigger proportioned behinds. Pretty sure the most common description of people so far was their “big ass”.

As I watched Jessica and Peter from a distance, frustration and jealousy gnawed at me. She had a tall, athletic build, undeniably sexy, with her most noticeable feature being her big ass—something even I couldn't help but linger on for a moment longer than I should've.

Marvel: Spider-Man - Potential Unleashed (Peter Si)

Marvel: Spider-Man - Potential Unleashed (Peter Si)

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
2 months ago
Replied to LazyReaderAlways

Didn’t he throw that one into a volcano? It’s been too long :D

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
3 months ago
Commented

I don’t know, I feel like you did pretty well on the first chapters to rewrite it to your preference but the newer chapters feel just like AI.

The night was far from over, but with friends like Rose and Sirius by my side, I felt ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. The attack had tested our resolve, but it also strengthened our bond. Together, we would face whatever came next with determination and unity.

Dropped Officially Go read something else instead.

Dropped Officially Go read something else instead.

Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
3 months ago
Replied to CouchPotatoDandy

That explains it a bit. If you don’t do that already you could try out grammarly. From what I know many authors use that for spell- and grammar checking.

Roosterbee
Roosterbee
3 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. I’ve got a question tho. Are you using AI frequently? It feels like the story is blown out of proportions while repeating the same over and over again. Something about the journey, his exceptional growth and Brom silently evaluating him,…and again the same. Feels like I read the same thing over 10 times the last two chapters.

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