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1 years ago
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Ive read everything that isn't locked behind powerstones and there are so many spelling, grammar, and sentence structure issues it was hard to follow let alone get immersed in.

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1 years ago
Replied to Unsalted_popcorn

Yup, I dont want to spoil anything so I wont give anything specific.

"Everyone's money is good here! Whether they are a native or an adventurer they can buy and sell at our establishment!" Charlotte explained with great disdain.

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3 years ago
Replied to Michael_Crew

New chapter coming Wednesday!

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3 years ago
Replied to Michael_Crew

To be honest, I am hoping 3 or 4 updates a week. It all depends on my full time job's schedule at this point.

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3 years ago
Replied to SirZed

Thanks for commenting! I haven't read a book on the platform for a while now so I had no clue about the fast fast being genre locked! That is something very good to know about this decision. IF I were to go premium it would only be after I have a stockpile of chapters; I would want to make it worth it for everyone. Again, thank you for your input!

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3 years ago
Replied to Fenrirthewolfgod

I thank you for your input! I used to read a lot on the platform and would always feel bad for having to stop reading a book due to the locked chapters. It is one of the reasons why I am reaching out to you guys and girls for input as readers. There used to be a membership thing where you paid monthly and got to ready as much as you could; sadly they got rid of the system for the current one.

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3 years ago
Replied to rolas

XD would you believe this is a spelling mistake that I now have to live with?

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vMMORPG: Broken Chains

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3 years ago
Replied to DaoSleepi

I have indeed played BDO ;p

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3 years ago
Replied to SCP3812

You're on the dot :)

"They have fairly easy matrices. The bare minimum runes you need to pay attention to are the following: the 'target', the 'source', the 'transformation', the 'movement', and finally the 'direction' rune."

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3 years ago
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A great story thus far! I'm always a fan of Video Game based stories! The story has great grammar and spelling; which is something I personally need to work on ;) The conflict developed in the story doesn't seemed forced at all and I cant wait to see where it goes!

  • vMMORPG: Broken Chains original

    vMMORPG: Broken Chains

    Games ACTION ADVENTURE R18 MAGIC MYSTERY VIDEOGAME HIGHIQ

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    James, a cripple since birth, is stuck laying in bed feeling as if he is chained down. He was born with a never before seen disease which made him unable to move his arms and legs. The doctors said it would be more humane to euthanize the boy rather than let him live a sad life. His parents were unable to kill off their boy. They decided to keep their child but swore to give him the best life they can. His parents and older sister lived up to their promise. He enjoyed his days to his fullest. His parents and sister would go on trips and tell him stories of what they experienced. They tried to take him with they once but he said he felt miserable being unable to be directly included in the fun. He found the he preferred being told stories that let his imagination run wild. His father spared no expense in searching for a cure or a way for his son to be able to move again. During his search for ways to save his son he created a medial technology firm. The technology he created for his son all ended up as products to sell at his firm. He needed money to continue the search. What the world did not know is that James’s father only saw all of technology they deemed divine gifts as failures. He was unable to find anything to save his son from his fate. That was until now. He firmly believes he found a way to cure his son! He set out to retrieve the last piece of the puzzle. Read to find out just what James does with his new found freedom in VMMORPG: Breaking Chains. Written for the Webnovel Spirity Awards Spring 2021 Current average word count: 2,100 words per chapter. ----- P.S. to the readers: I am trying writing as a new hobby. This story will contain lot of grammar and potentially spelling issues. If you are a stickler for grammar this story may not be for you. If anyone can get past those issues and continue reading anyway I will give you the best story I can write. If anyone likes the story enough and wants to be an editor/proof reader let me know and I will reach out. ---- The cover art while made by me it contains images found on google search. I do not own the individual aspects of the cover and am willing to change it on request.

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  • Into the Mist: vMMORPG original

    Into the Mist: vMMORPG

    Games ADVENTURE VIDEOGAME KILLER

    A Ghost appears and a death follows. A player with an unknown origin becomes feared by all. Killing for no reason, all they ask is "Why?" How did such an assassins come to be? There is only speculation. A God watches for entertainment at first but then a wind of change blows in. Read to find out who and what Ghost is. Cover is not mine, ask and I'll change it. Will update with an official cover soon. Discord: https://discord.gg/n87bJ33WWb

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