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bamjrr
male LV 14Just a Highschool student writing for fun
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You should probably stick to one form of showing dialogue. (Person: “example.”) isn’t really a good way to show dialogue, it kinda breaks your attention of the story because it sounds like your reading from a script/play. Stick to just using “” to signify when a person is talking like you are doing with the mc. Having both of those in there is really distracting.
ch 0 1 Looking him straight in the eyes...eye?
Marvel: The Huntsman Caught In a Spider's Web
Anime & Comics · spiderkayden
The time line of the story, you said Daenerys wasn’t born yet
ch 19 Announcement.
ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
TV · Marcia_05
What’s the time line?
ch 19 Announcement.
ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
TV · Marcia_05
The way this chapter is written was so hard to read
ch 0 2 An unexpecte trip
hollywood system: art
Celebrities · rollo1019to
Lots of spelling errors in this one champ
ch 14 Chapter 14: Montage Music is needed Pt.5
The Legendary Spider-Man
Anime & Comics · Mr_Stan
ch 10 -10- Big Brother
Arcane: Champion Witness System
Video Games · TypicalFicEnjoyer6
Some of the grammar needs to touching up
ch 0 1 Chapter 1- RETURN FROM EXILE
The Healer Prince : HOTD SI
Book&Literature · Drkest
ch 0 9 The Devil's Advocate
Snakes and Ladders (A Hollywood SI/OC)
Movies · Archonstine
I thought this story was forgotten about
ch 46 Chapter 46 - The Collision II
Lemillion In The MCU
Movies · The_Young_Flash
ch 45 Adjusting The Course
FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)
Book&Literature · CarlosDr3vna
This suit man😂
Sitting atop a building, perched with his long coat flowing behind him, Spider-Man looked on with solemn eyes beneath his glass goggles, wondering where to even start. There's far too many things happening at once for one man to handle. 'There's gotta be thousands of them. Where do I even start?' he thought to himself, however, he'd get his answer after hearing tires screeching and a loud clash of metals.
DC: Gotham's Spider-Man
Anime & Comics · LordOrpheus
In and* out
I took the subway, exposing myself to more of New York's busy life and the throngs of people that flowed in out of places in a ceaseless stream. Of course I soon found out a drawback of my telepathy.
Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
Movies · Saintbarbido
"What the—how is this—?" Mr. Negative looked left and right, bewildered, then looked up. High above, perched on the crane was a shadow. Six of his men were dangling off the crane in cocoons. The power he bestowed was useless. Utterly useless!
Spider-Man of Earth 65
Anime & Comics · MrLarsBar