At least one error, the primals are not overseers of the origin expanse but the real Universe.
It's okay this way, but I am kind of worried about the speed this story progresses. You already said your plan is to finish this story by the end of the year (might not be accurate),but if you don't plan to release 4 Chapters a day or have some mass releases I don't see how you will be able to bring this story to it's well deserved ending. Because there is just so much more to this story. First the conflict with the SHA and Michael is too weak to be a threat to the SHA, there is the plan from Loki ( I assume the farther of Michael's curses is Loki) too and we still don't know anything about the primal, just that they are kind of the strongest beings and some kind of overseers of the origin expanse. The will itself is unexplored territory as of now.
In the blink of an eye, Wang Chen's arms swelled rapidly, his muscles bulging and veins popping, his skin flushed with a purplish-red hue!
Staying Alive Cautiously in the Celestial Realm and Becoming the Strongest
Eastern · Sunk into the Pacific Ocean
I would guess its there sister and probably Michael's third God curse
Lucy
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SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
Fantasy · PeterPan
Red dragon?
These chapters are too short😢
If it will be a one sided slaughter I hope the author skips repetitive sequences in the story or cuts them short. Maybe it will have a different outcome than I expect
I love action and a little a bit of drama, but just don't you dare to destroy this author.
This is also just my interpretation.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain