MiseryEu

from the last couple chapters. I get the feeling, astra does not dislike watching, she dislikes feeling excluded. Every other time she has watched one of her wife's with someone else. She have either been involved, or been able to join in if she wanted to. With this being the first time she have been in a situation, where she felt that she where not welcome to join in on the fun.

established that spatial bags are super valuable, so valuable that it takes his family using a significant amount of their savings to get him one. throws it away because it got some blood on it, when it's also Ben established that he can easily clean with his magic.......

can't forget the two new wife's to, they are probably going to be taking up some chapters to be thoroughly introduced and have some initial character development. all in all, allot of new characters for you to think up background, characteristics, personalities, and future directions for. the capital trip, potential events on the way, potential sidetracks, arrival and so on. in the end you will have to know yourself best, but I have seen a couple authors that have burnt out trying to add to much in short order. you are quickly becoming one of my favourites, so i hope that you take proper care of yourself, so that we can have continued entertainment.

with at least 4 children on the way the lamia, I think it would be a bad idea to add the Hawkin at the moment. it's going to be allot of new characters needing time and attention to be implemented in a good way. But it also is a character that can be done allot with, so leaving the door open for a later meeting could be a way to spread the load of introducing new characters. could help both the readers and author with getting a feel and forming opinions of all the new family. it's also easier to remember who is who, and with what abilities. if they are not added back to back to back, to much info tends to meld together and have parts lost in memory.

it's obvious what you meant, but I also think that the statement becomes hilarious with the typo. Makes one wonder why not all of them are able to wave, they aren't missing any arms or anything like that.

Either way, so far she seems like a interesting character. Can't wait to see where you go with them in the future.

hmmm, I'm undecided on what to think about Sari. I find her coming of kind of toxic and insecure, like she have something to prove to herself. I think she is either a dom that have never had a partner, that has truly let her be in full control. Would also explain why she fell for Astra so quickly. Or she is the kind of switch, that the first time she actually lets's someone else be be in control, she is going to be shocked at how much she likes it. Alternatively that she have desires of trying the other side. But feeling that she would not be able to go back, if she let someone else be in charge, even for a little bit.

I think you where right, went back and found the skill description. children and designated lifelong partners. So maybe a upgrade will include said partners children, or children she in some way consider her own.