This chapter was extremely confusing. We end last chapter with Johann’s victory, then shaking hands and everything, only for the battle to continue? Also, what was up with Indeedee’s slashing? Using “far” when talking? Johann ruffling “feathers” on her head? It’s not the first time you’ve translated a chapter and it’s been disconnected like this. Was this something present in the original work too?
Last night, in his dream, Gengar suddenly shouted, "Henshin!" and the entire scene shifted into something bizarre.
Pokemon: Spiritual Master
Video Games · michaeI
Very interested in how this story will shape up. I look forward to the next chapter!
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It ended way too quickly. You have a way of drawing the reader in and making every word of a chapter so enjoyable. I felt like I was sitting in the same room as those three, listening to their conversation. Keep up the great work!
I'm definitely interested in seeing this story continue.
This story is such a fun read so far. You can tell how much effort both the author and translator have put into it. Not only do you have events happening that are fairly faithful to the MCU, but you get to learn about some real-life historical events and their causes/effects. It goes to show how much research the author must have gone through to write this, as well as the translator since they give explanations and little tidbits of history in their notes. Be warned, this isn't a power fantasy in the traditional sense. The MC uses his trading system to accrue resources, not physical/mystical power. This leads to him gaining power in an non-traditional sense to these kinds of stories, but it's extremely interesting to see this development. Another thing of note is that characters aren't forgotten. Think that the author forgot a character? Nope, they've been doing work in the background, we just don't see it because we're focused on the MC. This leads to the world feeling alive, especially since the MC's interference in global events leads to actual, tangible changes to world history. If you're looking for a story that has a lot of love put into it, is set in the MCU during the mid-20th century, and is as educational as it is fun, this is the story for you.
Pretty sure Noland is the frontier brain for the battle factory in Hoenn.
The Battle Factory's Frontier Brain, Thorton, was hunched over a trash can, still mid-dry heave.
Pokemon: Spiritual Master
Video Games · michaeI
I don’t tend to write reviews, but I’m enjoying this story enough to make an exception. This is a translation, but the care put into the story is undeniable. The original author has a strong idea of where they are going with their story, and the translator makes me question if it truly is a translation. The writing quality is top notch with minimal grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, if any at all. Updates are frequent. It’s hard to speak for the story development since it’s early on, but things look promising. Characters seem lifelike and have their own personality, and the world feels lived in.
Hey, thanks for the chapter! I like how Izuku is becoming more solid as a character. Why does he care about these people? He loves them! Why does he want to get stronger? To protect those he loves, which now includes all of his classmates. I think we’re getting close to him becoming truly Izuku, willing to leave his last life behind. Keep up the great work!
As of chapter 193-ish? Not above a baseline human. He has reasons as to why he doesn’t get enhancements, primarily to keep his cover considering he’s a big name, but I don’t want to spoil too much. At times it feels more like a WW2 recounting, alongside the aftermath of said war, but history takes a sharp divergence and you see a lot more Marvel stuff following the conclusion of WW2.
Dimensional Trader in Marvel
Anime & Comics · AHumanMadeMOFO