personally I would liked a more silent night, it just feels a bit off to go from killing 80 bandits then immediately to some romantic actions in the bath. it's kinda off, like give it some space. the next night or so.
I have no idea what happened to this novel, it started pretty good, now Dante is all over the place. nothing he says lines up with his actions and the way he acts changes every chapter.
This is honestly hard to read, it's the biggest simp novel I read in a while. how could the author even consider this plot.
I'm really enjoying the story, mc is great, and i think the whole beginning was well written. the author clearly knows what he's doing. I'm looking forward to the academy arc. highly recommend.
his way of speaking is too formal. it doesn't seem natural. when you speak to a family member you don't act like your speaking around the cia.
with correct form and coaches, working out at young ages has been proven to have no adverse effects on your body. it is a fitness myth, disproven by many studies. I also used to believe that it may stunt your growth, but it turns out not to be true.
Completely drenched in sweat, I took off my tunic and went to the clearing near the pond in the mansion's backyard. It was still about 6:30 in the morning, and some sounds had started making their way to my ears. I ignored them and moved some pebbles away from my path before starting my pushups.
World’s Strongest Became the Game’s Weakest Villain
Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
it is very good and am looking forward to the growth of the mc. I recommend giving it a read. a little criticism I got is there is a bit too much of a peanut gallery, 10 different characters reacting to the main characters speaking one sentence, stuff like that.
So I read up to ch 30 ish, I'm not certain how the story develops but I feel everything is too rushed, the system and power ups are kinda confusing to understand. maybe it makes sense in the authors head, but it feels like crazy amounts of info dump for something that might be better explained in just a few lines. Also the story kinda cuts and then continues on, but gives backstory to the cut in the next chapter. It seems really unnecessary and makes the reader feel 'wait what happened to xxxx, oh it's in the next chapter'. I'm sure the author has improved from the earlier writing, and if there are some newer works, I will give it a read for sure. TLDR worth reading but expect it to be a bit messy
well I am gonna drop the novel here. the writing is simply not good enough and the last 2 chapters have been disappointing. the way people interact with each other should be more realistic and follow their established character backgrounds. it seems like some horribly forced romance attempt and I have read enough translated cultivation trash novels to know what will happen for the next hundred chapters.
I really enjoyed it so far, up to about chapter 110. the main character is very ruthless but is kind to his love ones. sometimes I feel the love part is a bit off, like placement wise and perhaps spammed too much. Also he became brothers with someone in 1 day, and kinda let himself be used and dragged into a nobles fight. I can just see how the pointless fight will lead to them be tracked down by his mother's family. I wish it didn't have to be so obvious. maybe they could have changed there names at the very least and wore disguises. I highly recommend the book and feel at has good potential. I am looking forward to the next story arc.
Reincarnated in the Astral World
Fantasy · LamenThief