ch 194 Red Lotus Form! (3)
Eastern · Tian Li
Oh, Space Bag?!
ch 158 Sweep the Castle (3)
Eastern · Tian Li
No prob, that's great, thanks :)
missing word between could -in. Maybe "appear" or "strike"?
The first one was that fang yang had already shown before, the Venom Fangstrike. By using deceptive movements and an explosive outburst technique Fang Yang's spear could in front of the enemy with speeds that would make it seem like teleportation to the average untrained eye.
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
one too many "his already"
His already powerful comprehension when combined with his already with the snake soul that could passively guide his spear movements had a terrifying multiplicative effect when used together, allowing him to progress through the stages like he was flying.
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
as he was training* I'm not sure in witch aspect he's talented here, doesn't seems to be mentioned.
Fang Yang didn't know if it was because of the merging of his two souls during his transmigration but as it was raining, Fang Yang found out it wasn't bad, in fact, he could even be described as rather talented in this aspect.
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
This phrase need editing i believe
Besides digesting the tensing to Qi absorbing fruits and bringing his cultivation to the 6th level of the Qi refinement stage, he had also a spent nearly all of his wealth on his Battle Saint Corpse puppet.
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
cost* over coat
The corpse puppet was nearly a black hole for his spirit stones with its coat easily going into the thousands.
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
Second time he level up to 11... meanwhile none of his units level up anymore. System novel are hard to write cause u have to keep in mind lots of variable, XP, ressources, cooldown etc... But still, author is geting sloppy :x
ch 93 Alice's Power, Blackmail (2)
Games · Chenyu The Herder
Oh yeah, let's trust a little kid, surely she Can keep secret, and decieve adult!
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 What a weird guy!
Anime & Comics · Translator_Lich
Shame author dropped this, was a pretty good novel!
ch 105 105. Breakthough
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
Author speaks as if there was no food stocked from human and kobold tribe ... Also translator pls, fix this "Goblin" thing, it's kobold.
ch 48 Stone Golems, the Issue of Food
Games · Chenyu The Herder
Legolas, stop him!
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Games · Chenyu The Herder
Well it's better to understand what your actually reading yes, and that is just one of the many things. His parents can put a million for academy, but dont have enought to live for themselves, causing the death of the rest of his family. We often see authors using the "mysterious reason" card to justify shaky writing and it's seriously becoming old. Since ur inviting me to drop it, i'll exactly do so.
ch 13 Hunting Duck
Fantasy · Arrkein
S rank growing skill for a F rank quest ... What is he supposed to gain from S rank quest ? ZZZ+ ultra super duper mythic?.. Nonsense rly... And 500 gold from doing errands lv1~3 for just a bit? What about when everyone is high level? They can all gain billions from high end quest ?.. One of the key of games is balance... Makes no sense so far.
ch 13 Hunting Duck
Fantasy · Arrkein
Yeah but i mean, a shelter can't work without water in the first place, the location is the most important, defensive situation, natural ressources ... With such a bad start, how is the MC supposed to stand out? It's like starting with a crippled leg from the get go. Your synopsis hooked me, but the story feel very plain so far :s
ch 0 5 Troublesome Enemy
Fantasy · sahejRocks
Meeting himself... please, no timeturner BS... ><
ch 83 Chapter 83: The new professor
Harry Potter: Another Chance
Book&Literature · Krio_Genix