KOTOMINE

KOTOMINE

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4 years ago
Replied to DaoistUltraGamer

I have not misunderstood, the answer I was giving you was to tell you to relax. You do not have to give such a serious Review in a Fanfic, if you are going to do it try to think that I am a novice writer and that it would be better to give constructive criticism instead of a serious Review. In fact if I had taken it wrong, I would not have thanked you for the Review. Likewise, I just wanted to tell you that I have nothing against you and I would appreciate criticism that helps me improve instead of telling me the mistakes I have and leaving it at that. Anyway, I thank you again for the review and I will try to improve in writing, maybe when my holidays come I can dedicate myself to improving some things. I hope you were not offended by my answer since that was not my intention.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to DaoistUltraGamer

First, thanks for the review. Second, this is a fanfic, it is obvious that I will change some things to make it more convenient for me to write (If you want I will copy you all the League of Legends novels, biographies, etc. And I will sell them to you as stories) Although that would not be funny. Third, I use Micrisoft Translator, I only let me translate a maximum of 200 words, it is obvious that English was going to look a bit strange, I am in my first year studying English. So if you have more time please give me more of these reviews and tell me where the errors are. Although I suppose for someone who has the time to do serious reviews on a fanfic which is not a job. Do you really think that I would worry about something as miniscule as orthography? I have to work, study at the university and now I am changing to live alone, I try to answer all the doubts that the readers have, in fact, I am doing this answer while playing a game of Lulu Ad. (**: I don't make any money with this, so if you want something serious I would recommend you go see Akika40, although I suppose his English is better than mine, right?) Thx again for the Review.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to uSeer

I didn't want to make it too long, so I kept it short and simple.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to YourRaven

The truth is I do it because they are the champs that I have more knowledge of. My mains are Tristanna, Lulu, Poppy, and Morgana. Sorry if you don't like it, but since I have knowledge about those champions I make them appear first, and then I can investigate the others.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to Daniel_Kim_0931

https://universe.leagueoflegends.com/en_US/ This is the link, Comics, Champions, Map, etc. Thx for reading this fic.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to Daoist21616161

I'll try to get the romance going at a good pace, but don't expect r-18 scenes in the first 30 chapters, there might be some kissing and stuff. Thanks for your understanding.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to ElDaniWar

I don't want to sound stupid, but I'm the only one who believes that having sex in the first 50 chapters causes no real breakthrough in romance, it's more like a carnal relationship. That's why I try to make there first romance and then sex. I hope you forgive me for this but I believe in romance. It's like in Re: Zero, the Subaru that I made is not a pussy, it just doesn't have enough time for that, he had to fight Elsa, he had to save the children of the town, he had to attend the real elections , had to fight the whale. Also, I don't like body-only relationships very much, it's as if you did it with a girl and then she did it with another and it reminds me of NTR, I have a deep hatred for that gender, my girlfriend cheated on me with another guy even before that we saw each other naked and we only had 8 months of relationship ... Sorry, I didn't mean to bother you with this ... It's just ... I don't want the relationship to be meaningless, I would like to slowly cultivate romance.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to Aiden10

Yes, but Reinhard cannot use the magic of his world, since he has the disadvantage of Defective Door, if Reinhard will occupy magic it would have to be from League of Legends, btw I will not say anything else to avoid spoiler.

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KOTOMINE
4 years ago
Replied to Trpstars74

I Love You Bro(No Gay), This comment lifted my spirits.

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