GreyMalken

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2018-05-31 Joint United States
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GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Commented

thats what not cultivating his core and treating his body like trash got him.....

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Replied to MadRat1286

yeah, debit vs credit option with card I think.

"Umm, cash... " Yuki bit her lower lip, thinking of how she was spending 2,000 on a new phone. But… She knew it would be helpful in emergencies. After paying the money, Yuki had to go through the process of setting the phone up so that only she could use it. If down the road she wanted to add someone, she could do so easily with a simple drop of blood from the person.

Soul Fusion Online

Soul Fusion Online

Games · invayne

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Posted

It's slice of life, eastern style urban fantasy, wuxia lite in a modern setting. It's surprisingly good and wholesome to read. Highly recommend it.

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Replied to Br0ken_Blade9

*Magnum opus

"I let someone else be the face of the company. Some poor shmuck gets all the credit for the price and confidentiality clauses involved. That is his entire life now. Managing his image, what a dumb fuck. We found the actor, and he gets paid about one hundred thousand a year to be hounded by reporters and intrusive looks into his life. Meanwhile, he has no power at the company. We all get to make decisions without anyone knowing. None of that Fuck Victoria for this glitch in my or this needs balancing I just get to live my life and work when I want to work now." I get it; although she might get tired of doing nothing, she just completed her Mangus opus, if you will.

Trap Online

Trap Online

Sci-fi · Madjic

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Replied to Cinque_39

Didn't seem like a robbery, guy didn't ask for money, just charged up screaming and stabbing. Was he a jealous father/boyfriend of one of the cat-calling ladies? Was he after an underworld bounty? Was he triggered by Liam's aura, or the aura of the T3 metal? Dunno...but it would be nice to know a little more. The way Luan just shrugs and motors on sticks in my craw, it's very foolhardy of him and doesn't fit the profile of a reincarnated, wiser protagonist.

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Commented

why does he not investigate this attacker at all? even a few moments to interrogate, especially with mind/soul search, could be worth it. there are clearly faction(s) in the shadows after him and his stuff. he might want to focus on cultivating for now, but making a list of known active threats would be wise, especially since his friends and family are not as invincible as him. He might be bulletproof, but is his Mom?

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Commented

very shallow villain, not happy with it, could be better. like why did he not try to shmooze first? kidnap first, con-artist later is all out of order even for scum relatives.

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Replied to aoikuro

I hope it doesn't, actually. Would be a good divergence from the original.

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
3 years ago
Replied to Willowith

Will continue to read to see if the story is inspired from, or plagerized. I liked EER's premise but didn't care for some of the later developments, so I am currently hopeful this story takes the same launch point in a better direction.

GreyMalken
GreyMalken
4 years ago
Replied to General_Volkov

Flower power?

Thirdly, the forefathers of the human race had brought about cohesion and centripetal force.

My Senior Brother is Too Steady

My Senior Brother is Too Steady

Eastern · Get to the Point