OoguruRyuuya

OoguruRyuuya

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2018-05-23 Joint Germany
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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
3 days ago
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I have a feeling you are never sure about any chapter xd You don't have to worry. So far, whenever you were unsure the chapter was great anyways.

AN: I'm not really sure about this one. I don't know if I characterized Dumbledore and Harry well enough. I wanted the headmaster to be solemn but not afraid of dying, a bit like how he was in Canon. As for Harry, he was laying one of the last parts of his plan, even if it wasn't shown. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions. I don't mind rewriting this one if you don't like it; like I said, I'm not entirely sure about it either.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
17 days ago
Commented

Watch him steal a journal only for it to be filled with gibberish. They will assume it's coded and decode it only to come accross the corniest poetry immaginable.

The headmaster hummed, "If the boy is truly a seer, then he'll be in danger. There is probably a reason why he is adamant about leaving Britain after the end of the school year, probably a vision. He'll need to be protected near us. Voldemort must not get his hands on him. But before any of that, we need to make sure that our assumptions are true first. I need you to steal his journal, Severus. Only then, will we be able to proceed."

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
20 days ago
Commented

Mind magic?

He jumped to the side to barely dodge the bright green jet of green light that was coming at him. Holy shit, what the fuck was going on?

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

Seeing 'Earth 2' gives me flashbacks from when I tried looking something up in the Marvel wiki.

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

I'm super hyped for this arc. Feel free to stretch it a bit.

Anyway, I thought it would be fun to give Harry trying to deal with Canon for a little while, but I don't know if you guys will like the idea or not. Just to reassure you, this arc will be relatively on the small side. So, we should be back to the original dimension soon.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

I honestly like these chapters. They are very interesting in their own right. I just wish they would happen between major story beats in the main plotline and not in the middle of one.

AN: So, Voldemort is finally back. I changed up the ritual a bit since I think it was more suitable to how I portrayed magic in the story and I tried to tie it to what happened during the Hogwarts Express attack... I know most of you don't like chapters without Harry in them but I honestly believe that Voldemort's return should be a Neville-centric event.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

I really wanted to see Harry overwhelm Lily. Unfortunately this was more along the lines of what I expected. Could have been worse though.

AN: Alright, that was pretty hard to write. I rewrote this like twice and I hope it landed like I wanted to. I don't mind rewriting it again if you guys don't like it, because I had a blast coming up with the fight sequence. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions...

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
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You're right, I was hoping for the resolution of last chapters cliff hanger. This was still a good chapter though.

AN: I know most of you want the Harry/Lily fight right now, but I sort of needed to do this first. I realize that some of you don't care about Neville all that much, but this event is sort of important for the final resolution of the story. Anyway, I can guess that most of you know where this is going, but I'm not going to spell it out. The next chapter should be the Harry/Lily, so don't worry about that. Anyway, I hope you like it. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

We're gonna have to wait multiple days to see the continuation of last chapters action aren't we? Such cruelty.

This was his moment… At least that was what Neville Longbottom thought as the canon fired, proclaiming the start of the third task of the tournament. This was the moment where the entire magical world would start to acknowledge him, not for his fame, not for the fact that his parents sacrificed themselves for him, but for his skills as a wizard.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

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"I'm sorry, Harry, but I can't let you do this…"

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr