SorcererCat

Author Suggestions: When the MC puts up his Soultrait Symboles on the Cosmic Trading Market, for others outside of the Tritan Alliance to buy, outside of the monetary price he should also charge personal Achievement Points, like 10%-20% of what Soultrait Symboles of those quality would normal cost them in the Achievement stores. This way those who are buying them will get a really good deal and the MC would be able to start gaining even more Achievement Points to get things he really needs. And for the VERY good Soultrait Symboles he could even charge a few Race Achievement Points. He could also have the Achievement Point price higher for Soultrait Symboles that he leveled up higher as well. Another suggestion is since you now have Danny, Michaels brother, with a rank 9 Soultrait Symbole in Swords/Blades and he has all this Superior knowledge on them and on Sword/Blade aura, you could have him put together many different levels and styles of high end blade/sword/fighting techniques to give out to the Tritan Alliance to greatly increase their fighting styles and knowledge. Kind of like a legacy system that someone can get to learn step by step till they are a master/expert in that style and with the techniques in that style. AND since other places in the universe don't normally have high end Soultraits then maybe these Fighting Styles and knowledge could be sold on the Cosmic Trading Market to those outside of the Tritan Alliance as well.

Author Suggestions: When the MC puts up his Soultrait Symboles on the Cosmic Trading Market, for others outside of the Tritan Alliance to buy, outside of the monetary price he should also charge personal Achievement Points, like 10%-20% of what Soultrait Symboles of those quality would normal cost them in the Achievement stores. This way those who are buying them will get a really good deal and the MC would be able to start gaining even more Achievement Points to get things he really needs. And for the VERY good Soultrait Symboles he could even charge a few Race Achievement Points. He could also have the Achievement Point price higher for Soultrait Symboles that he leveled up higher as well. Another suggestion is since you now have Danny, Michaels brother, with a rank 9 Soultrait Symbole in Swords/Blades and he has all this Superior knowledge on them and on Sword/Blade aura, you could have him put together many different levels and styles of high end blade/sword/fighting techniques to give out to the Tritan Alliance to greatly increase their fighting styles and knowledge. Kind of like a legacy system that someone can get to learn step by step till they are a master/expert in that style and with the techniques in that style. AND since other places in the universe don't normally have high end Soultraits then maybe these Fighting Styles and knowledge could be sold on the Cosmic Trading Market to those outside of the Tritan Alliance as well.

Author Suggestions: When the MC puts up his Soultrait Symboles on the Cosmic Trading Market, for others outside of the Tritan Alliance to buy, outside of the monetary price he should also charge personal Achievement Points, like 10%-20% of what Soultrait Symboles of those quality would normal cost them in the Achievement stores. This way those who are buying them will get a really good deal and the MC would be able to start gaining even more Achievement Points to get things he really needs. And for the VERY good Soultrait Symboles he could even charge a few Race Achievement Points. He could also have the Achievement Point price higher for Soultrait Symboles that he leveled up higher as well. Another suggestion is since you now have Danny, Michaels brother, with a rank 9 Soultrait Symbole in Swords/Blades and he has all this Superior knowledge on them and on Sword/Blade aura, you could have him put together many different levels and styles of high end blade/sword/fighting techniques to give out to the Tritan Alliance to greatly increase their fighting styles and knowledge. Kind of like a legacy system that someone can get to learn step by step till they are a master/expert in that style and with the techniques in that style. AND since other places in the universe don't normally have high end Soultraits then maybe these Fighting Styles and knowledge could be sold on the Cosmic Trading Market to those outside of the Tritan Alliance as well.

Author, a suggestion: When the NEST comes for the MC you could have Danny, his brother, convince the MC to let him, Danny, be the real soul/person to take the oath of loyalty and the NEST wouldn't know because it would look like the oath of loyalty was connected to the MC since Danny's soul is in the MC right now. This way the MC would be free of their control and would be able to learn everything about them and their secrets and use that information to free Danny and his Parents and his Sister from the NEST. He could even free others who would end up joining the MC in the end. This way the MC could work against the NEST without them knowing it or having the GEAS stopping him from doing so. The entire time the MC will just go along with the NEST's orders pretending to be under their GEAS until it is time to turn against them. This way the MC wouldn't be their dog and would instead be spying on them while becoming stronger till he can deal with them.

Author, a suggestion: When the NEST comes for the MC you could have Danny, his brother, convince the MC to let him, Danny, be the real soul/person to take the oath of loyalty and the NEST wouldn't know because it would look like the oath of loyalty was connected to the MC since Danny's soul is in the MC right now. This way the MC would be free of their control and would be able to learn everything about them and their secrets and use that information to free Danny and his Parents and his Sister from the NEST. He could even free others who would end up joining the MC in the end. This way the MC could work against the NEST without them knowing it or having the GEAS stopping him from doing so. The entire time the MC will just go along with the NEST's orders pretending to be under their GEAS until it is time to turn against them. This way the MC wouldn't be their dog and would instead be spying on them while becoming stronger till he can deal with them.

Way to be a necro.

Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.

Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.

Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.

Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.