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Lordbaron97
1 months ago
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Lordbaron97
2 months ago
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(This chap aged poorly...or maybe I'm just prescient? Also sorry for the late update. I went to see Deadpool lol.)

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

TV · Alittlepiggy33

Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
2 months ago
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Thank you for your hard work, you’re a great writer and take care of yourself.

Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
3 months ago
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just stop the bomb from exploding and kill lev lainur and skip the F singularity, so you don't have to delete chapters.

Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
3 months ago
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just stop the bomb from exploding and kill lev lainur and skip the F singularity, so you don't have to delete chapters.

Sorry to those looking forward to this arc but it was either I stop this arc and write a different one later or me never writing due to the lack of excitement to write.

Ultimate Herrsher in DxD

Ultimate Herrsher in DxD

Anime & Comics · Shonpufi

Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
5 months ago
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Give him the original name of the shadow monarch, Ashborn

Hey, how are you doing? It's the author here. How was the chapter? Did you like it? Also, I want to mention that I've noticed many of you don't like the name Osiris, so I'm giving you a chance to change it. Please leave in the comments the name you like the most, and the one with the most votes or the one I like the most will be chosen. With nothing more to say, see you in the next one.

Arisen in marvel

Arisen in marvel

Movies · Writermood

Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
5 months ago
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I don't know if you know but p@trèon gives you 72 hours to appeal, if you google to appeal for deletion of p@trèon account and follow the steps perhaps you can reactivate the old account.

Lordbaron97
Lordbaron97
5 months ago
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A piece of advice, reread the chapter, the dialogues seem a bit forced, people (especially in a position of power) are reluctant to believe that they don't have control of the situation, the dialogue (in my opinion) lacks a bit of contrast between the parties and raiden should express himself in a more confident and decisive way, he has the will of gaia on his side and that of all the heroes and some have an enormous arrogance and a political experience that would make anyone pale, in conclusion, we should also take into account the heroes with whom interacted and advised him throughout the story to express his character and attitude. This is my opinion, I hope it can be useful to you, otherwise I really like your story, keep it up. translated with google translate