EdanKote

English is not my language, I use this site to help me learn. Despite my poor command of the language I will try to write a review. I read 5 chapters before quitting. The characters do not act with logic. I don't know if there are many casinos in London, but for an 11 year old to walk in so easily is impossible. I even think that the author never went there. Even McGonagall's reaction is unnatural. There are plenty of other details that make me stop and I don't want to list them all here.

the story changed so much in beast master that I verified that I was still reading the same novel. .........................................................

too many wishes. I have read only one chapter and I will not go further. I think it will be quickly abandoned by the author. ..........................

Please translate the name in the English version. Impossible to know which character speaks or acts. Otherwise fanfic has good potential. (English is not my language, I use webnovel to improve myself)

I decided to stop reading in chapter 12. ..................................... .................................................. .................................................. .........

English is not my language and I am using this site to improve myself so I hope my review will be understandable. (I had to use google translate for some words) the MC is content to plagiarize the work of our world without taking into account what made the plagiarized works a success, moreover the MC has too much facility to be noticed in the middle of hundreds or even thousands of streamers.