aurora_moon90

aurora_moon90

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2018-04-20 Joint Malaysia
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aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
2 years ago
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Ignoring the slightest grammatical errors in the story, the mother and daughter pair has a nice relationship, thus make the story admirable. It is relatable in real life in a way.

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
2 years ago
Posted

The characters and the plot are great. But the author could make some improvement in his/her grammar, story line and dialogues. Nice work dear author. Keep it up! ;)

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
2 years ago
Posted

Hello. Truth to be told, I was quite confused by the first chapter. As I progressed, I could understood and fathoms all the descriptions and details in the novel. It does describe very well how depressed people thought. We, everyone of us have some imaginations, how to make the world a much better place to live and etc, and in other time, we sometimes preferred silence more than bustling people around our proximity. It's that complicated. You did a very good job with your story. But it will be much better if you could develop it in a proper plot line.

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to Honey_Joan_Sajulla

Hello. Thanks for every love. If you will, could you please leave me some decent reviews? Really appreciate it. In return, I'll give you one code in which you could redeem 100 coins.

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to pallu1994gr

You'll know if you read more. psst..I had dropped few hints here and there. 😊😉

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to Saf124

Thank you very much for your wishes, support and the power stones. My daughter so far doing okay although there's some glitches in her steps but June 3rd she will undergoing a brain test to monitor her brain waves, either she had unknown seizure or anything else. Do pray with me she'll be healthier. And for your info, I'll publish a chapter everyday, starting June 1st. Tq again.

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to Shiny_Star5683

When you love someone deeply, you will become too sensitive by that person's actions.

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to ForeverPupa

Thank you so much for your well wishes and thank you a lot for the gift too. 🥰😊

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to Chocolates_Dark

Cheater is the most selfish person in the world in my opinion..as they have many excuses to justify their actions.

But, now his feeling had changed. He did not know how it started, when it started or why. The next thing he knew, his feelings had shifted to Cindy. If it was possible for a married man to marry again, he would gladly kept his marriage with Luna. But, in this country, the law prohibited it. So he could only choose one and he chose Cindy.

Loving You Eternally

Loving You Eternally

Urban · aurora_moon90

aurora_moon90
aurora_moon90
3 years ago
Replied to Chocolates_Dark

yeah but we can't dictate other's perspective as most people said they are the epitome of love. 😊🙂

Luna was smiling when Mr Liu said, "Yeah, she can't live without me, her Romeo. Hahaha..."

Loving You Eternally

Loving You Eternally

Urban · aurora_moon90

  • Loving You Eternally original

    Loving You Eternally

    Urban COMEDY MYSTERY FIRSTLOVE

    If loving someone selflessly was wrong, then what is the right thing to do? Luna Wang married to a man whom she love, giving birth to a daughter, she thought that was her happily ever after, until her dreams shattered, thus leaving her broken-hearted but she strived to remain strong. She determined to never be emotionally dependent on anyone anymore. But God has another plan for her. Why did he appeared again? He is dashing, coming from a wealthy family, but had shamelessly stick himself to her since their first encounter. He is the very first man whom had made his marks in her heart since the first time she saw him..her first love, Danial. "I love you but you abandoned me, thus leaving me with my unrequited love and broken heart." Now, they met again after long seven years. Trying to amend his past mistakes and give themselves a second chance for their first love, he persistently and shamelessly getting closer to her and courting her. Just when he thought the happiness he pursue only a step closer, he was suddenly forced to abandon her. Her happiness or her life? What would be his choice? Clouded past history between them. Numerous death threats from hidden enemy. And another love rival?! Really? His life couldn't be more tougher than now. In the end, could she forgive him? Excerpt: "What're you doing here?" Luna glowered at the men with folding arms. "Camping." They stated the obvious and childishly scuffles among themselves just to pass a grilled skewer to her. "I can see that, but in front of my house?" she eyed the three different skewers but did not pick any up. **This is not a werewolf novel and no rape scene ever. ....................................... ***Entry Novel for Webnovel Spirity Awards (WSA) 2021*** *** Theme: First Love *** All the characters name, time, places and sub-plots are fictional. Any coincidences were unintentional. ** This is my first novel and English is not my main language. Please bear with my grammatical errors. Thank you. ** The cover page was from Pinterest, credit to the owner and edited by me.

    235 Chs 99 Collections

  • Elite Assassin's Special Love original

    Elite Assassin's Special Love

    Urban ACTION ROMANCE MYSTERY MULTIPLEIDENTITIES

    Betrayed by her secretary and losing her ability to walk a year ago, Fu Mingxia decided it is the time to put a stop to her misery life. Then came into her life two fluffy babies, whose presence giving her infinite strength to fight her war and also taught her the wonderful feelings to be a mother. On one fateful night, her peaceful life was interrupted by the sudden intrusion of an assassin which his aim was to eliminate her, but undignifiedly fallen into her backyard. Not like it was the first time it ever happened. "Do you want to continue sprawling on the ground? Or should I tossed you out?" Fu Mingxia manoeuvre her electrical wheelchair and stopped around three meters from his position. The man sprang up from the ground and back-flicked his hidden curved dagger toward her before his eyes shook when he unintentionally glanced at her face. "It's you...how--" But she skillfully dodged and soon he felt his foot numbed. As he looked down, he saw a tiny dart pricked his calf. "You..!" .. After his first failed attempt to assassinate her, the man kept coming into her backyard. His persistence finally captured her attention. Not in the romantic way anyway. "What're you doing here again?" "I love you." "Do someone as busy as you love to play around like this, Master Shen?" .. Fu Mingxia's retreating back after revealing the huge secret and conspiracy in front of a mass of people without looking back at him made Hao Shen realised his chance to be with her was diminished. But he refused to give up. So he make some shameless moves just to show her and everyone, she is his special love. The love that he swore to protect till eternity. What is the secret? Could his shamelessness thawed her cold heart? ***Cover photo from Pinterest edited by me. Credit to the owner.

    38 Chs 23 Collections