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Proddingly slow

Umbridge is such a hateful character , even Voldemort is a saint in front of her.

I got goosebumps.

What is this repeating pattern of “the last potter”? Is it really necessary or is it to fill the word count?

Really interesting but it’s difficult to make head or tails of what the original author is trying to achieve with the characters.

Haha. Fun chapter

Dumbledore concerns himself too much with school children.

Translator kun Darkside_cat is back with another HP webnovel. Hooray. 🙌

Some contained matters not “convenient to mention “ 😏

A homunculus or poly juice?

Its well written but it is also just recycling Harry potter tropes.

This just seems forced

Thanks for the chapter, but why is the actual content lesser than the announcements and other auxiliary stuff?

Thanks for the chapter. A bit of feedback, the Last crouch, as a form of address was used too frequently. Though I guess from the ending it doesn’t matter much now, does it?

Is this dead?

Thanks for the chapter. Wishing you a speedy recovery. Yes the pacing is a bit slow, but its still better than the druid arc. What would be nice to see if there can be more powerful characters added in. Raising Bryan to Dumbeldore’s level means that once he is OP the story will lose meaning. Bringing back Grindelwald, Voldemort and Herpo etc might keep it interesting enough.

To the author, Thanks for the chapter. The story is going too slow. Please move it along .

All this foreshadowing needs to end and the entire fiction at least needs to get to shippuden arc.

First anbu was created by Tobirama. I believe it’s cannon.

Great chapter. Bring out more.