TheGrandLabyrinth

TheGrandLabyrinth

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Yuri is love, Yuri is life.

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TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Replied to Grandmaster_17

Yeah, but the problem with having Sapphire reveal everything, even to a relatively trusted character without any impulse is that it makes it feel unnatural. Especially if it just ends up being an info dump where every bit of exposition is just piled on at that point. To make it work there needs to be an understandable reason why the Sapphire wants to of has to speak up. Its sort of how in cannon Blake only revealed that she was a member of the white fang because her emotions got the better of her.

TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Replied to AnaR7Xist

Yeah, I get that. For me too this has gone on longer that I would have liked, but I also just don't want to end up like a lot of other stories on this sight and just gloss over character parts of the story and just skip to the 'fun' parts. Don't worry too mush though, this chunk is almost over, and the story will move on to something else.

TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Replied to DoctorWhoFan

:)

It seems that my glance was noticed, as after the stocky man took in a deep breath and closed his eyes, he solemnly spoke, "Regrets, huh. Everyone has a few, some more some less. Mistakes are all but inevitable in life, and you'll find yourself making countless. It's just how it is."

RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

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TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Replied to Tyler_Hagen

"Ninjas of Love" is what it was called, yes.

"Su--," I start to agree, but I remember a certain book that, if anyone found out I had, I would die of embarrassment.

RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

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TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Replied to TheSnap

Tell me about it. I don't understand how people become early birds.

After I finish getting cleaned up and ready for the day, I put on my gear, and pick up the photo off the bed.

RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

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TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Commented

Translation: "I pledge my soul to the great goddess to grant me the power to slay all in my path."

"Z hamgkv en aryc ld bki xjtiw kfvsmvw kg vzdrk et bki gglmu xf kaib ecd xv pc gsip."

The Spider Queen

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Commented

Translation: "none shall survive the spider's wrath."

"Rfft akecd hcuzznt bki jhxlhv'j ogiwl"

The Spider Queen

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Commented

Translation: "all creatures shall be enthralled in our dark web."

"Rda kuirljzhw jzpto fv wcbkvrdamg me gjz geic lme"

The Spider Queen

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Commented

Translation: "The night shadows within behind the mark of the ancients."

"Lwm qmxzi akeugla zmkzxv eiyacl wlv epzn sw lwm drtatvww"

The Spider Queen

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

TheGrandLabyrinth
TheGrandLabyrinth
3 years ago
Commented

Translation: "we are the hunters of the universe,"

"Eh eiw iph llfimuw fx iph yeakmuwv."

The Spider Queen

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

  • RWBY: A Matter of Perspective original

    RWBY: A Matter of Perspective

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE YURI RWBY

    "Where do Monsters come from?" A simple question with a deceptively complicated answer if it could even be called that. Monsters are made by us after all, who else could? "What about heroes then, where do they come from?" A not so different question with a not so different answer. We make them ourselves. Who else would? One might now ask, "what's the difference then?" To that a confusing answer, as the difference is in who is telling the story as there is no more complex illusion than simplicity, and honesty is but a fairy tale: a lie. Nothing more. Nothing less. ----------. Fanfics tend to be pretty cringe. With most out there being either super-OP characters that can sneeze wrong and the world explodes, overly edgy mc that makes it hard to read, or just blatant sexual fantasies, it's no surprise why people avoid them. With this novel I aim to try to make an actual story with actual characters. This is my first time writing anything beyond schoolwork, so don't expect much. That being said, while I may not have a degree in English, I have been speaking it most of my life my life and that comes with at least a little confidence, so the grammar wont be abysmal at the very least.

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