It's a very good fanfic and I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far. My major complaint however, is the Primordials keep talking in between the story. It's bot ones or twice they talk/give information and leave, but they keep talking in between dialogues, which throws the story off. I wish they talked in one section, and left the rest of the story to Percy..
There us no Crude Oil to start the industrial revolution But I don't think there will be shortage of Kerosene of they can get natural gas Also Lamps were there in the canon more than once You don't think they have had canisters in there do you?
But still, he answered, "According to the rough map available, all the storage units, including the one for food, weapons, and money is on the southern side of this compound. There will probably be a few Beyonders guarding there. We can set fire to the structure. The Beyonders all over the compound will come quickly to save their stuff. Their arrival will probably be staggered, so we can take a few of them out before most of the others arrive" said Alvin.
Lord of the Mysteries - A Hunter's Tale
Book&Literature · BKH
I already started working on it I will start releasing chapters again in a few days
Extra ingredients are for subordinates He needs a bunch of subroduabtes of the Hunter Pathway
There is nothing missing Frederick hypnotised Clyde as they were resting, discovers the conspiracy, and flees. The Red Angel activates a hidden psychological cue to lure him to Backlund, and destroys his physical body, but Amon doesn't let him be killed. Hence, Frederick is left to escape in Spectre form.
Well, the Mahabharata is mythology........ So I really don't understand what's your point?
The ultimate schemer ' Shakuni'.
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Thank you for the concern I just don't have the time for now for now due to some pursuits I should be more free in about a week though
For a careful guy, a less careful guy appears careless It's all relative.......
I started using Grammarly for the later chapters...... Other than that this is a fanfic I write in some spare time, I don't think I can put much more effort to get it peer-reviewed.........
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Lord of the Mysteries - A Hunter's Tale
Book&Literature · BKH
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original Lord of the Mysteries - A Hunter's Tale
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Alvin Hans woke up one day to find that he had transmigrated into the world of Lord of the Mysteries. He was hiding in the suburbs of Backlund, inheriting from his now deceased predecessor his memories, a vengeance seeking quest, a bunch of people after his life, and an extraordinary item of the Hunter Pathway, a few weeks before the start of the canon storyline. Aiming to make the best of it, Alvin decides to live put a fulfilling life, with the goal of becoming the Red Priest. Image is not owned by the author. If you would like me to take it down, please do tell me. Thanks to Zan_M for the recommendation. Lotm is owned by Cuttlefish That Loves Diving and Qidain.135 Chs 2.3k Collections
What is MHA?
I took on this hobby because I enjoy the works of G.R.R. Matin and I wanted to tackle it. I may have been way too ambitious. Maybe I should have done a Pokémon or the MHA instead, but for better or for worst I will finish this story. I will just have to release once or twice for the week, I will try to experiment with sightly smaller chapters to see it that will help, I averaged around 3000 words before but instead I will try 2000 for now and see it that will help.
The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024