in reality this is orion's fault, he mentioned his sister and she went into an unstable mental state and concluded that everything was caused by issac, besides she is cursed and that makes her obsessed with issac although it is not revealed why. the reason for the costume I have no idea
With it came countless emotions. Helplessness, anger toward Katlynn and even fear.
Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
I like the previous one better, from the personality to the way you built the plot, it was slow but gave space for the development of the characters, plus I like the mentality that the protagonist had before to see the world and its people as living offspring and not just trying to advance in the ranking, so far I'm disappointed with the rewrite, the previous one seems better at least at the beginning, this one skips so many interactions and descriptions that it's unfortunate, it goes too fast for my taste. Not to offend, just what I think because I liked the previous one.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Prove your Worth
Book&Literature · Morpheus_vos
i have a hard time understanding mc, he's a good guy most of the time but when it comes to lust i don't know what to think, i understand it's because of his past and all that but it seems like there's more lust than feelings for his girls and i say this because of the few times his feelings are mentioned. his thoughts almost always go towards lust, what i want to know is he going to be more consumed by lust or not? very good story!
ch 173 Mai Supremacy
Anime & Comics · FanHarem
the brand does that? personally I don't like them to be influenced by something to change but to do it because they want to and that it is their conscious decision without external influence.
Mai wasn't sure to be aroused or scared... but then again, that was the whole point. Pain and pleasure and seeing the red print of Nik's palm on Azula's trembling butt cheeks, Mai couldn't help but gulp audibly. She wanted to try it... and the mark always made it easier to accept a few things. Mai hadn't said anything but she was beginning to wonder that the Mark of Fertility didn't only increase the body's sensitivity... but during the mark is applied... it also served to shift one's thoughts to a more... degenerative side. She could think about that later, however, as her hands already acted against her will be planting a breeding tattoo over her crotch and dialing it up to 8 times rather than 5.
Anime & Comics · FanHarem
when someone dies of that race hoopa will take their souls and give them a new life in the disformity or what will he do?
ch 25 25. Intrusion of the Crystal Labyrinth
Others · The_Bip_Boop2003
I have a question, was his body altered from his original body to toji's or was the body created from scratch? I don't know if you know what I mean, I ask because if it's the former in a sense the chemistry in his brain as well as toji's memory or instincts are there that's why he doesn't feel hesitation or am I thinking too much haha.
The girl began crying, hoping for The Flash, the hero of Central City, to come to her aid. However, Victor jumped out from the shadows with a cold look on his face. Although he had not been a trained killer in his past life, he didn't feel the hesitation he expected.
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
Will you continue it someday?
ch 61 (Not a Chap)(Remake) StrawPoll for April Stories
Others · OneMoreScore
he can also tell a partial truth, that there are times when he sleeps he receives knowledge from other beings is not a lie plus it would allow him to be much freer to train his powers and batman gets a partner to train with and improve.
One of the best martial artists in the DC universe, on par with the likes of Lady Shiva, Batman, and several others. Includes his knowledge on martial arts, meditation, philosophy, and all other helpful/important knowledge.
Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_
it would have been better if you showed the first meeting with every important villain, it feels like a waste not to do it. i like it a lot even though it's just starting so far the novel i'm most looking forward to reading.
Those trafficking rings alone had given her over 2000 criminals, due to the sheer size of each of them. She had also gotten 2 for the every 5 major gotham villains. With the villains being Joker, Harley Quinn…twice for those two. As well as Mr. Freeze once, the Riddler, Scarecrow, Killer Croc, Condiment King…who counted for some reason, and finally Penguin.
Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_
now that you said all that I hope she has an encounter with the original gwen or a variant, it would be very very interesting.
Potential harem members: Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, Amity Blight (if you know, you know, AU), Luz Noceda (AU obv), Hinata Hyuga (or Tsunade), Catra, Adora, Jean Grey.
Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_
they didn't suspect garaki? right after they left the hospital he is kidnapped and not only that but they also had information about his peculiarity, it makes you wonder where they got it from? in general the kidnapping scene is fine but not perfect the police should have investigated the sounds of gunshots but they were hidden for an hour without the police or a hero appearing, you should have specified the area where it happens for example it is unpopulated, no heroes are circulating, it is far away from people etc.
ch 12 Chapter 12: The chase and escape ( 3 )
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
I saw it in the original language, I hadn't thought about the dubbing.
"Itachi!" A bright smile bloomed on Sasuke's face as he ran towards his brother, arms open to hug him.
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
what was the mc's appearance like? I forgot.
'I feel like I'm too poor to be here...' I thought, removing my slippers and walking in. I didn't know the words to describe it well enough, but the house was made in a Japanese-Tatami style; the minimal, almost spartan decorations on the walls served to accentuate its charm. The best way to describe it would be "measured opulence".
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
when sasuke was a child he called him nii-san not by his first name
"Itachi!" A bright smile bloomed on Sasuke's face as he ran towards his brother, arms open to hug him.
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
this point is one where many readers don't fully understand, the body affects the mind whether it be thoughts or emotions all because of the chemistry that is produced in the brain as a child so it is normal for him to be reckless, for his thoughts to leak out to others either verbally or by changes he doesn't notice in his face, to be controlled by emotions and therefore show immature behavior no matter what mental age he has had unless he has had some training to control himself in his past life. I personally like a mix of both, showing his thoughts and his immature side as he changes throughout the novel, seeing a child being totally logical and controlled is boring.
Personally, I like writing both. What do you guys like to read? The rampant and chaotic thoughts of Aoki, or a chapter like this; objective and reasonable with hints of Aoki's personality seeping through? Currently, it's been a mixed bag of both with a focus on the first person, but I may do more of this if you all enjoy this more.
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
in the future you could make an auxiliary chapter showing the information of the mc as well as his belongings (weapons, clothes, armor etc) as well as images of his appearance of the mc and his belongings? if possible only. so far i really like the novel, whenever there is a naruto fic they always give everything to make them op and go from fight to fight, this one i like a lot because of the rhythm, showing how is his life and the interactions with the others.
I grabbed everything I needed, donned my altered outfit, strapped on my armour and tightened my headband.
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
almost all the female members and some male members towards the end of shippuden, i think it was mentioned in some chapters that hinata had potential but she was too nice and shy, plus she is one of my favorite characters. i could choose rock lee or neji but i would like to see a female member who is described as a powerful person. (traslater)
P.S. Who's a side character in Naruto that you think was underutilised? Tell me your favourites, maybe I can add them in ;)
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
Personally I liked it better when Tanya could detect when Anya was reading her mind, although this isn't bad either.
Tanya just stared at Anya with a confused expression of shock on her face as all she could think was 'I haven't even done anything!'
Anime & Comics · SwissChocolatess
at some point you will upload a photo of the protagonist? you could use one AI
Consciousness thundered through my senses as the coldness of night swept past my bare skin. My eyes began to flutter open as the voracious nature of reality around me brought a calmness to my mind. Winter winds grazed my skin and caused goose bumps to rise along my exposed arms and legs. I was wearing a small pair of pants and shirt that were barely enough to cover my assets. Looking down with my actual eyes I saw the odd sight of light purplish skin refracting small amounts of moonlight. My nails were a beautiful obsidian black and gleamed in the moon's hollow light. My ears twitched as If they were a moveable appendage, something that was soon confirmed as I tried to twitch them again.
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds