Yap28

Yap28

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2018-04-02 Joint Global
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Yap28
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Yap28
4 months ago
Posted

i stop reading after chapter 4 due to the author inconsistency, let me make my point here the mc should be older than haku, but it keeps getting changed from older bro, to lil bro. at first I thought oh ok then i read it wrong or prob the author changed it, but then he became the older bro again wtf, if this fanfic isn't translated, please be consistent bro, make a few notes or something, stop changing things at ur will, but honestly it got potential for a good read, idk bout the update stability so i'll just give it 5 stars for now

Yap28
Yap28
4 months ago
Commented

so shou is 7 or 4? the big bro? or the lil bro? is this translation?

Yap28
Yap28
Yap28
6 months ago
Replied to Cifer_Amos

should be second, third war is the time where minato rise

Speaking of which, wasn't Tsunade's lover Jiraiya?

Naruto The Thunder Calamity

Naruto The Thunder Calamity

Anime & Comics · Gustina_Kamiya

Yap28
Yap28
7 months ago
Commented

why not change his name a bit bro 😭

Yap28
Yap28
8 months ago
Replied to Kingless898

rightt?? i thought so too XD

Yap28
Yap28
8 months ago
Commented

still cryin no matter how many times i see this scene, no matter how many times i read it 🫠

Yap28
Yap28
8 months ago
Replied to Weebish_Jedi

yeah i've read it there too, and i'm planning to change the character to SI at that time, honestly it's pretty good if you compare it to the other chinese naruto fanfic

Yap28
Yap28
8 months ago
Replied to Yap28

fck wrong account...