Fresh_Linens

Fresh_Linens

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Ellipsis is my favorite grammatical punctuation mark...

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Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

I think there is to much focus on what is to be and not enough focus on the now.

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

This seems very forced. Ill keep reading but i hope it improves

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Replied to Markushnia

Christmas and Vatican are unreleated. Its like saying 1+1 = 1. Christmas is a commercialized holiday with roots in paganism, judaism and other religions as a winter solstice celebration. Christianity being one of those religions.

"A happy Yuletide to you, Mr. West." said the man as he strolled to the group with a smile on his face. Jacob Greengrass was a tall man with black hair and blue eyes; he had traditional aristocratic features with an angular face and a strong jawline.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

I thought his plan was to not become popular or to stand out to much?

Quinn eyed the letter and smiled, 'With this, I am one step closer to becoming the most influential student in Hogwarts.'

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

Britain’s Auror Academy??? Isnt the whole purpose of going through the school to meet the qualifications to join the Aurors? The apprenticeship i understand, but a seperate vocational school???

Lia had finally graduated from Beauxbaton Academy Of Magic and was ready for the next stage of her life. It turned out that you could study beyond the seven years of education as seen in the series. After the initial seven, you could apprentice under a certified master, join a vocational school like Britain's Auror Academy, or you could end your education and join the workforce immediately.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

Spell Check

Garp left the Island just after a weak they arrived and Blaize hadn't seen him ever since. Finishing his daily One-punch man workout in the training ground, he panted a little while sweat covered his face.

Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

Anime & Comics · FanficMortal

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

Yes because torture has always been the right answer and most satisfying solution to getting betrayed.

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

The Harem Stamp

Description: A special tool that grants willing parties a sub-routine of the Supreme System. All parties branded via this tool will be tied to the system and will be unable to betray the owner to the core system.]

Darius Supreme

Darius Supreme

Fantasy · Kotario

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks for another great chapter

Fresh_Linens
Fresh_Linens
3 years ago
Replied to romeotango148

Thats not who this character is. If he did that it would be such a sharp left turn in the character that it would derail the entire story.