Yuzumi01

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I like story some like fanfiction

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Yuzumi01
3 months ago
Commented

Hei bro, can i just transfer to you be member in your patreon, my bank is reject connect to paypal

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
3 months ago
Commented

Why, is so Long for update next chapter, are you ok😟

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
3 months ago
Commented

I love ai, don't you watch episode 1.... How sad his fate

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
5 months ago
Replied to The_Synonym

It's okay, I enjoy reading your version of the story. Looking forward to the continuation.

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
5 months ago
Commented

Sure, here is the translation into English: --- There is a small issue in the story. According to the plot, the situation of Class B, which was discussed at the summer camp, mentions that Class B is only taught by one hero, their homeroom teacher. This is why Class B is envious of Class A, as they are taught by many heroes. But it's okay, because this does not significantly affect the story. Or perhaps it changed due to the presence of the main character.

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
5 months ago
Commented

Hey, i want join your member, but i don't have credit card dan paypal

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
6 months ago
Posted

Banyak lubang dalam plot. Terlalu buru- buru dalam pembuatan plot. Terlalu banyak campuran anime. Seharusnya lebih pelan dalam ceritanya. Disarankan untuk untuk membuat plot lebih perlahan agar cerita jelas

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
9 months ago
Commented

Maybe you could try to rewrite this chapter without disturbing the continuation. because I feel uncomfortable when you describe D's character in the wrong way, D is an evil god who is so bored that in search of fun he creates a system to save the planet for fun. Even if there are existences that he doesn't understand or new variables, he won't destroy them instead he will regard them as entertainment and a new challenge for those who can reach him, that's why he provides the heresy skill. Please improve it so that readers will continue to continue your story. Also try to create your own world, don't stick to the existing plot, besides that, don't make the MC directly OP, please explain the process of getting it more clearly. Lastly, pay attention to the balance of power, don't make it too OP so that the story is monotonous and has no ups and downs

Yuzumi01
Yuzumi01
9 months ago
Commented

in the Kumo Desuka series. Every time an Appricial skill is used on an opponent, the opponent will feel uncomfortable and disturbed, and will be aware that they are being watched.

  • Transmigration to Kingdom with ChatGPT original

    Transmigration to Kingdom with ChatGPT

    Anime & Comics ISEKAI ANIME

    After failing his civil servant exam for the second time, William Yulius, a recent college graduate, finds himself trapped in despair and hopelessness. In a chaotic mental state, he suddenly wakes up in a mysterious foreign forest, far from the comfortable city life he has always known. With his smartphone connected to ChatGPT, he hopes to gain information that will help him survive in this unknown world. However, William soon realizes that living in this new world is not as easy as he imagined. Without access to all the modern comforts and facing difficult challenges, he struggles to adapt. Relying on ChatGPT's limited capabilities, William must learn how to survive amidst uncertainty while trying to find a way to navigate this strange land. In the midst of his struggles, William also confronts profound questions about his dreams and life goals. Will he be able to turn his failures into new opportunities? And will he discover the true meaning of life, even when all hope seems lost? Join William on this winding adventure full of life lessons as he strives to achieve his aspirations, despite facing various challenges in a completely different world. ####### This warning is not a novel about being overpowered; there will be many failures in the protagonist's efforts. I aim to bring modern elements into this novel, like Dr. Stone, but with the character’s intelligence, there will certainly be many failures. ####### I plan to write up to 50 chapters, even if no one reads it. However, if the story lacks interest, I will consider concluding it within those 50 chapters.

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