maybe adding something more ? like insted of only smiling he had a soft giggle or something? some more description of his surroudings, because for those not so familiar with sousei they may find It hard to make a mental image of the place. If you can adding imagens on the coments to complement the description since the place already exist and you can find the images in the manga. and something to indo até a change in scenarios and POV.
A/N: Hm.. somehow this chapter just doesn't feel right for me, it's like I'm missing something. Damn it bro, my mediocre author skills are telling me something, but I don't know what it is.. Maybe it's the way I portrayed the emotions? Or Sutara's reasoning of wanting Rokuro to be his family? Argh fuck it. This is a problem for future me, not the present me.
Twin-Star Exorcist: Rokuro The Gamer
Anime & Comics · Leip0t
i realy Hope you dont drop this, i am realy liking it
well at least the MC have stile (i mean rokuro)
The wheel stopped at a Golden stripe, Michael read the words on it and it said "Rokuro Enmado."
Twin-Star Exorcist: Rokuro The Gamer
Anime & Comics · Leip0t
i agree i realy like that one but i have forgot some things because of How much time passed since i least read it
Michael hummed as he pretty content with the wheel fell on. Twin Star Exorcists was a series Michael liked, though it was a long time since he last read it meaning he would probably forget a few details.
Twin-Star Exorcist: Rokuro The Gamer
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o manga é melhor q o anime n perdeu muito n
[Sousei no Onmyouji (Twin Star Exorcists) <2 Star World>]
Twin-Star Exorcist: Rokuro The Gamer
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i dont like Rukia as a partner but as a friend she is realy good and funny
{Ah yes. Kazuya Ishihara, the tall dommy mommy lover.}
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
where do i Signe up for ?
"It is a matter of life and death for me…" Sung-Sun gazed at her blankly. "I would have killed myself if he didn't accept me. Being with Kazuya is the same as breathing to me."
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
o know i am 9mths late to say this but, her It Go anyway, It a diference in aproache,while rose whant to protect them in the front line and fight, Sung whant to be strong so she can protect them when things Go south
He had noticed something earlier when she was in her swimsuit and hoody. Her baggy clothes concealed a slender body gifted with the right amount of curves at places. She pulled off the perfect combination of elegant and alluring. Her bare body also showed her Hollow hole in the same place as Apacci and Mila Rose — all three girls of Tres Bestia had a yearning for strength for different reasons. The lioness wanted to protect, the deer wanted to surpass the world, and the snake most likely wanted strength to prevent the deaths of her precious friends.
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
well not wrong but not exactly i think in his case It would bê more like high human or Divine human because from where is born well more like somente in the middle of those 2 races
[Race: ???]
Twin-Star Exorcist: Rokuro The Gamer
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