*hopping
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Games · Galanar
letting *me* turn into
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pink fleshed if I recall
"Thank you for accommodating us. We are Expedition Wrenched, a Nomadic Vessel in search of new technologies to share with the Innu people. It is an incredible pleasure to be here aboard Terminus, home to so many new and incredible sights." The lead Innu woman greeted him, clearly filming her arrival for a later social media post.
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Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
I really enjoyed reading this segment. It kept me reading and wanting more, occasionally bursting out in laughter. There are definitly a few spelling mistakes that can be corrected. I will most certanly come back and read it again.
everythung is gone .. Then ning asks if he wants the house taken with as well.
Some stars were coming towards or Some stars were moving towards moving and coming in this sentence are the same thing.
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Eastern · Snoring_Panda
urther -> other?
Each group would then be assigned to a certain location, with urther objectives that needed to be completed while they were at the location.
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Fantasy · Avan
They took turned -> They took turns
They took turned for night watch duty. The next morning, all four of them rode to the east, towards the place where Klea's boat was anchored. Emery could just use the [Spatial Gate], but Thrax insisted he had to see what was left of the battlefield.
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Fantasy · Avan
do you mean "The time dilation is about 1 hour to the 6 hours in the outside world
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Eastern · Snoring_Panda
inched -> inches
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