*stalked it (i think, since it is only 1 beast)
Luckily, the beast had been slumbering deeply when Rain entered the ruins. She stalked them silently, found the enemy, and managed to devise a feasible plan without alerting the abomination.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Like nephis told her, it isn't enough for her to be as good as sunny, she needs to be better, since she had all the resources he didn't have
*Very few things out there could.
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
*sorry
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I think one says "took one last glance" or "looked one last time"
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
*too far
Ray's shout tore apart the silence, but he was far away to do anything.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
*fell
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
*"That was why I..."?
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
*anything
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Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
*"become Awakened" or "awaken"?
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree