The idea is fun and the book could be great if it weren't for 1 problem. The writing quality makes it unreadable to me. Please find a good editor because the potential is certainly there .
The Story is very interesting. It has a different point of view then most Harry Potter fanfics, with a teacher as the main man. The only annoying thing is the translation quality... Some of the choices made are strange or downright wrong (like ancient studies instead of ancient Runes or convinment instead of detention). A bit sloppy, translator should read the English HS-versions for reference (a tip ). Overall a fun read
Enjoyable book! Bit darker then other HP fanfiction (anti-hero) but I really like it. Are you gonna keep posting here or somewhere else? Keep writing please!
In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
Book&Literature · ayrus2011