For trial: I review writing like translation. Story in trial look good. But only few first chapters, are of some quality translation After chapter 6 (missing chapter) is only MTL translation. I don't understand how can webnovel want for us to pay for unlockicking further chapters(20-40) with this quality? Book look good but nobody will select it because stupid MTL translation and book will probably fall to oblivion and that will be pity, because book look interesting. If book can gain quality translator, then book can be gem. There currently is not many books with villain (neutral/good/ bad - hard to describe) character. But because of translation I can only give really bad review.
So today I finished the whole book. I have to say that from my point of view this is one of the best here on Webnovel. I don't mean to offend the book, but Webnovel. The book is great, but the webnovel is getting worse and worse, the worst thing is that it has the rights to books, which then no one else can and does not want to translate, and the books are therefore completely lost. On the contrary, full junk flocks here one after the other. But back to this book: I have probably not seen any translation errors or instability. the story unfolds fast enough and here and there it is quite entertaining. The characters are well explained and have their depth (in terms of webnovel - you can't expect reality in a sci-fi book) the world is constantly growing and by the end all the mysteries are sufficiently explained. The only downside is the extra chapter, which again ends in an absolutely stupid way and doesn't explain anything at all. It would be understandable if there was another part, but as far as I understand, there is no sequel. And if it exists, it doesn't depend on him enough to explain it. If you end up on the chapter - end - you do best. Otherwise, I have nothing to complain about. I read the last comments here and I don't understand them. Most are absolutely out of the bowl. I don't understand the few who really know what they're talking about, if they have read the book to these places, why they suddenly don't like it. When the plot and everything is still moving the same pace forward and something new is still happening. For me 5/5 and 9.9 / 10 (because of the extra chapter - without it I would give 10/10).
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