Ey thanks, though one does not need to be good at something to understand whether or not someone else is good or bad at something, it certainly helps when you’re trying to fix your own writing, i haven’t gotten around to writing anything lengthy yet though, so i wouldn’t say i’m any good at writing yet.
"Brute Force Longhorn Beetle Gu, a Gu Master who uses this Gu will be able to burst out with the strength of a cow. You can walk away, but don't regret it!"
Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
Oh, i think you might like guild wars then, It’s not super long yet though, and it’s been quite some time since i last read webnovels, so it might have been removed/gone downhill though, i did try cultivation chat group but i didn’t enjoy it all that much :(
No, interesting, though i think that Problem could be dealt with better in another fashion, especially since this is fantasy/fiction, but bleeding does have it’s own uses huh, aside from coagulating a wound for better healing.
It also made the vessels more flexible and replaceable with spare blood vessels going to places and taking up the job if the main blood vessel was damaged, this, as well as the placing of small contractable blood stopper muscles at different convenient spots around her body, made bloodloss a non-issue if she was severely damaged.
Fantasy · KingFischer
Thanks for the LotM reccomendation, really enjoyed that book, though i wasn’t very fond of the mc.
If you can tell me that they definitively resolve the issues i listed then i am willing to give it a second try? Those issues are what ultimately forced me away from the book, if they don’t get resolved I wont be able to enjoy anything else in this book no matter how good it is, simply because the author himself wrote and proceeded to forget what he wrote, there is no theorycrafting for the future of the characters in this book because its all stupid ass mc who gets in trouble and authors asspulls keeping him alive, despite having other tools at hand. Also; i already know you can’t do that, because someone else would have already done it if you could; ppl love to call out others for being wrong, but i’ll give you a chance to adress those issues yourself.
«Wow! Impressive!»? Don’t quite understand what you mean, i’ve never seen approbation used before this one time
"…" She seemed to give her approbation, but she could not stop her chewing.
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
It might be an attempt at replicatIng the suffix «-ee», as in «Evolvee» referring to a member of a group of people that have «evolved» or in this case gained wierd powers...
Alex returned to the room where Jerry was, currently Jerry's experiencing the same process he had in the ruins chamber. When he saw Jerry, Alex felt a little bit jealous, the guy in front of him was one of the lucky individuals who had the spirit enhancer talent. They were very rare. In his previous life, Jerry was a high wind spirit enhancer. His ability to run faster actually was not coming from his muscles like any other body enhancer, but it was because of his talent in air manipulation, he was unconsciously able to reduce air resistance and used pressurized air for propulsion. He was an Evolve, the term that was defined by the doomsday pillars as a person who could enhance both their body and their spirit. Alex might not be an Evolve, but he knew a way from his previous life to get an ability that could make him strong enough like an evolve.
Sci-fi · Avan
Oh wow, leave your injured but valuable friend alone in a base where he recently killed the leader, anyone smart would take advantage and grab jerry as a hostage. this is litterally a den of criminals, the carelessness is headache inducing.
After that, Alex took a walk around the compound by himself, many eyes were facing him, but they were not sure what to do so they let him be. Their reaction was entirely reasonable; they were not as trained as police or military organization. They had no chain of command, so when the Boss died, they were not sure what to do. Anyway, Jacko's announcement already spread, they will know more tomorrow. They cleaned up the bodies and put them into one of the empty rooms for the moment until further order.
Sci-fi · Avan
perhaps they move, but they wouldn't move any more than normal, and they certainly wouldn't "shoot up"
Mark's eyes shot up as he heard some unfamiliar terms.
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion