KingFischer

KingFischer

male LV 11

KingFischer because: King of fishing (i fish sometimes) King of chess (Bobby Fischer, a chess prodigy unmatched in raw talent, afaik.) The Kingfisher, a cool bird.

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KingFischer
KingFischer
2 years ago
Replied to Clevermindz

perhaps they move, but they wouldn't move any more than normal, and they certainly wouldn't "shoot up"

Mark's eyes shot up as he heard some unfamiliar terms.

Mutagen

Mutagen

Sci-fi · Exallion

KingFischer
KingFischer
3 years ago
Replied to Sunil334

Ey thanks, though one does not need to be good at something to understand whether or not someone else is good or bad at something, it certainly helps when you’re trying to fix your own writing, i haven’t gotten around to writing anything lengthy yet though, so i wouldn’t say i’m any good at writing yet.

KingFischer
KingFischer
3 years ago
Replied to Nicole_G_7057

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"Brute Force Longhorn Beetle Gu, a Gu Master who uses this Gu will be able to burst out with the strength of a cow. You can walk away, but don't regret it!"

Reverend Insanity

Reverend Insanity

Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren

KingFischer
KingFischer
3 years ago
Replied to next2nics

Oh, i think you might like guild wars then, It’s not super long yet though, and it’s been quite some time since i last read webnovels, so it might have been removed/gone downhill though, i did try cultivation chat group but i didn’t enjoy it all that much :(

KingFischer
KingFischer
3 years ago
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No, interesting, though i think that Problem could be dealt with better in another fashion, especially since this is fantasy/fiction, but bleeding does have it’s own uses huh, aside from coagulating a wound for better healing.

It also made the vessels more flexible and replaceable with spare blood vessels going to places and taking up the job if the main blood vessel was damaged, this, as well as the placing of small contractable blood stopper muscles at different convenient spots around her body, made bloodloss a non-issue if she was severely damaged.

Witch of Sloth

Witch of Sloth

Fantasy · KingFischer

KingFischer
KingFischer
3 years ago
Replied to Uncivilicized

Thanks for the LotM reccomendation, really enjoyed that book, though i wasn’t very fond of the mc.

KingFischer
KingFischer
3 years ago
Replied to Aashray_Juneja

If you can tell me that they definitively resolve the issues i listed then i am willing to give it a second try? Those issues are what ultimately forced me away from the book, if they don’t get resolved I wont be able to enjoy anything else in this book no matter how good it is, simply because the author himself wrote and proceeded to forget what he wrote, there is no theorycrafting for the future of the characters in this book because its all stupid ass mc who gets in trouble and authors asspulls keeping him alive, despite having other tools at hand. Also; i already know you can’t do that, because someone else would have already done it if you could; ppl love to call out others for being wrong, but i’ll give you a chance to adress those issues yourself.

KingFischer
KingFischer
4 years ago
Replied to Arthur_Li

«Wow! Impressive!»? Don’t quite understand what you mean, i’ve never seen approbation used before this one time

"…" She seemed to give her approbation, but she could not stop her chewing.

Lord of Mysteries

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

KingFischer
KingFischer
4 years ago
Replied to Octaeon

It might be an attempt at replicatIng the suffix «-ee», as in «Evolvee» referring to a member of a group of people that have «evolved» or in this case gained wierd powers...

Alex returned to the room where Jerry was, currently Jerry's experiencing the same process he had in the ruins chamber. When he saw Jerry, Alex felt a little bit jealous, the guy in front of him was one of the lucky individuals who had the spirit enhancer talent. They were very rare. In his previous life, Jerry was a high wind spirit enhancer. His ability to run faster actually was not coming from his muscles like any other body enhancer, but it was because of his talent in air manipulation, he was unconsciously able to reduce air resistance and used pressurized air for propulsion. He was an Evolve, the term that was defined by the doomsday pillars as a person who could enhance both their body and their spirit. Alex might not be an Evolve, but he knew a way from his previous life to get an ability that could make him strong enough like an evolve.

Doomsday Pillars

Doomsday Pillars

Sci-fi · Avan

KingFischer
KingFischer
4 years ago
Commented

Oh wow, leave your injured but valuable friend alone in a base where he recently killed the leader, anyone smart would take advantage and grab jerry as a hostage. this is litterally a den of criminals, the carelessness is headache inducing.

After that, Alex took a walk around the compound by himself, many eyes were facing him, but they were not sure what to do so they let him be. Their reaction was entirely reasonable; they were not as trained as police or military organization. They had no chain of command, so when the Boss died, they were not sure what to do. Anyway, Jacko's announcement already spread, they will know more tomorrow. They cleaned up the bodies and put them into one of the empty rooms for the moment until further order.

Doomsday Pillars

Doomsday Pillars

Sci-fi · Avan

  • Witch of Sloth original

    Witch of Sloth

    Fantasy REINCARNATION CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION VAMPIRE ELVES

    The demon kings of hell ; 9 total of which 7 consist of the 7 deadly sins; Pride, Greed, Lust, Envy, Gluttony, Wrath and last; Sloth mentioned from strongest to weakest their powers based off of the origin of their respective powers, gaining more power by motivating others and themselves to follow the teachings of their cultivated sin, the remaining demon kings were Mephistopheles and Faust, usually in an alliance with 3 deadly sins each while scheming against the other. The demon king of sloth was too lazy to bother with their politics, being the ruler of the 6th layer of the vampire realm, many demon kings coveted his land and power, but out of fear for the unknown they hesitated, the demon-king of sloth, Belphegor, wasn't known to flaunt his power, but he did rule the 6th layer of hell, his powers an ever-growing mystery, and as a demon king if he decided to; he could self-destruct and if any other demon-kings or beings equal were closer than 400 meters they would die with him. That was one of the main reasons the other demon-kings didn't fight all out with each other, rather waging a proxy war between their closest enemies and furthest allies. But that all changed when a mystical meteor landed in the vampire realm, more specifically; within the territory of sloth, but the demon-king of greed, Mammon, and the demon-king of envy, Leviathan, were quick on the uptake and had it investigated as well. What had come? The demon king of sloth, ever lazy, found out at the same time as Mammon and Leviathan got news of it; a being, more specifically a heavily injured woman, on the cusp of godhood had been smited to death by the tribulation lightning used to create a god-body and a god-soul. All three were shocked; demon kings were originally not powerful enough to be gods, the closest to reach godhood was Lucifer, already having failed his ascendancy once without dying, the demon kings had speculated that one would need to be powerful enough to control all of hell to succeed the ascension, Lucifer had been powerful enough at the time of his attempt, but was attacked and distracted during it; making him fail. The wealth of this mysterious woman attracting all three demon-kings; they met, and because of the self-destruct function of their origin of power, began negotiating who would get what of the resources, techniques, and relics, after a short while they decided to split the resources between king Mammon and Leviathan while Belphegor would get the techniques and the first pick among the relics. He picked a pendant holding some foreign black and white stone, and he received an unusual technique. A divine technique, something unheard of, the greatest techniques being sacred techniques like the origin of sloth and other origins. But the requirements of the technique were too stringent; One needed to be female to even start cultivating it, and being a body cultivation technique it required massive amounts of resources, more than the king of sloth ever managed to accumulate, maybe the demon king of greed would have enough, but even he couldn't become a female on a whim. Belphegor spent years trying to make the technique viable for men and trying to lower the costs of cultivation, but the lower the costs he managed to reduce the more apparent a female body was the core of the technique. Having a divine technique obviously attracted attention, Mammon and Leviathan, knowing they had lost out, came knocking on Belphegor's door. A fight broke out and sloth self-destructed his origin of sloth, killing both Leviathan and Mammon in the blast. Somewhere else, in the mortal world, a girl lazily opened her eyes, looked down and saw a broken pendant with a crack and a female body. " hu.. hu.. huhaha.. HaAhaHaHaahhHaAHAHHAAHAHHAHHA!" a Bone-Chilling laughter of maniacy reverbed from her room, reminiscent of a witch's laugh of obsession. *** I do not own the art in the cover, contact me if you want it removed.

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  • Writing attempt 3 - power system original

    Writing attempt 3 - power system

    Fantasy REINCARNATION CULTIVATION

    Idk, it’s an attempt at making a powersystem that is vivid, lifelike, adds a touch of magic while remaining mostly rooted in logic, has limitations, costs, different uses, wierd quirks you have to consider,backlashes if you make mistakes, the backlash being a natural cause of what happened and not just spitting blood and becoming pale, complex combinations, different levels of proficiency within different categories, an overall substance that fuels the whole system overlaid the mortal world, items neccecary to maintain for some cost that will help you conduce that power, and so on and so forth, if you want to use the powersystem i invent here for your own use, you are free to, aslong as you credit me for it in your synopsis. As for the power scale; it is not confirmed yet, but due to the general knowledge of the world, it is assumed that while excrutiatingly difficult to attain, eternal life should be possible. This is the kind of eternal life where no outside force can affect your lifespan and no inside force can affect it either, you can get pretty close to omniscience, but it will never be perfect, and as for omnipotence? Just like omniscience, it will never be perfect, but you can get pretty close, after all the concept of omniscience and omnipotence are self-defeating. So this power system is for novels with characters that want to be immortal, once you reach a certain level you can’t get off the tigers back, as the chinese sometimes say, this means it’s very hard to stop cultivating if you want to survive, and even still, it is hard to survive even if you want to survive. Uhh there is also a bunch of other stuff there, like just cause i wanted to write and had nowhere else to put it.

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  • The longest title on this whole site will be claimed by this daddy longlegs so don't you worry child for daddy has a plan for you; the sequel of the remake of the ripoff of the sequel of the original. original

    The longest title on this whole site will be claimed by this daddy longlegs so don't you worry child for daddy has a plan for you; the sequel of the remake of the ripoff of the sequel of the original.

    Urban

    The title is exactly 200 letters and symbols long, why? Because i can. Should i fill in all the 4000 words i can in this synopsis aswell to make the longest synopsis you will ever see? Nah the title was enough. Don't read my other books; i hate them. This is a book made half-jokingly / half seriously; i'll write if i feel bored or under similar circumstances. To summarise i will probably just write introductory parts of story ideas i have to see if i can come up with a good permise and get readers invested; don't expect anything. If i make a story i find to be up to my standards i might write a few chapters of it.

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  • Karl's Requiem original

    Karl's Requiem

    Action

    Karl was the lead programmer for a company making the latest AI super-program, for the new quantum computers on the market. As he was making the finishing touches, after 3 days and nights of continuous work to reach the deadline set by the company, he dies. But his soul somehow fuses with the super AI and he proceeds on to his next life with a ridiculous advantage. This is the story of Karl and Requiem, the super AI. -------------------------------------------------- I'm just trying this out as a hobby, so this would be my first book, i'm going to try to make it hard to have to rely on a suspension of disbelief, so there will be complicated concepts and such that might not work in real life, that i use to make sense of the situation. If you're curious, feel free to ask in the comments. If my story resembles yours, it is definitively not my intention, let me know and i will see if i can do something about it. As of now, there will be no scheduled chapters, but if i feel like it i will write. Enjoy~~

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