CaptaoCav

CaptaoCav

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professional lurker trying to become an amateur author, I also post in scribblehub and spacebattles if anyone is interested.

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
14 days ago
Replied to The_All_in_One

Also, because of how bad trying to fight Anakin went, Purity and one other escaped, then there's Kayser who didn't fight and Night and Fog, who faced Anakin on an earlier fight, but managed to retreat.

Holy shit, I just watched the videos, the guy just flicked that woman away, then threw Hookwolf at the giant woman! He's giving a whole new definition to the phrase, 'hitting a motherfu*** with another motherfu…'

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
14 days ago
Replied to The_All_in_One

Kaiser wasn't there, Hookwolf was defeated early on, he tried to jump Anakin, but Anakin just grabbed him midair, crushed his wolf shape into a ball and then used him as a projectile against one of the Giant twins.

There's still the Merchants, the Undersiders, Circus, and a few other independents.

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
15 days ago
Replied to ExistentialVoid

Haven't posted it yet

So... Turns out I couldn't write for a few days, then had a complete blank for both of my FF, I did manage to write a few pages for my original story and get started on another Naruto FF I've in my head, but, for the life of me I couldn't think of how to write the chapters for Supergirl or Will.

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
24 days ago
Replied to The_All_in_One

I mean, the battle started and Anakin imediately used force speed to try and flee, Everything was moving at the speeds of a speeding car.

Unfortunately, things had happened too fast, their miscalculation became clear and the order to disengage was given less than 40 seconds into the battle but, by then, Susanoo had already captured Armsmaster and was about to murder him.

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
24 days ago
Replied to CaptaoCav

Ugh, ended up being 3 days, sorry about that

CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
27 days ago
Replied to Anos_iapa

Finishing it soon, give me a day or two.

CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
1 months ago
Replied to Ouroboros_Outings

Nevermind, going into the chapter editor it was messed but, see if it's fixed now

Kal-El's body tensed and quivered as wave after wave surged through it, his muscles locking in place and a small groan escaping his lips.

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

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CaptaoCav
1 months ago
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What? But it looks just fine on the browser and mobile when I check?

Kal-El's body tensed and quivered as wave after wave surged through it, his muscles locking in place and a small groan escaping his lips.

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
1 months ago
Replied to STRIKER0

I actually share some of those feelings, I don't really enjoy reading a story where this plot point keeps coming up and, usually, heavily prefer when the MC never reveals it. I wasn't planning on revealing her past life, or even mentioning it too often in this fic because, despite her rebirth, she IS Kara Zor-El... far more than she is her past self. Unfortunately, I'm also a discovery writer and, as I was writing this chapter (and a few before it) things naturally progressed towards this point. I could, with a lot of work, write this out of the story, but it just felt like something THIS Kara would worry about and coming out something she would do, an evolution of her mental state. . Still... I completely understand your frustration.

"Right, well, I actually remember a different life, one where everything here was simply an animated series…"

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

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CaptaoCav
CaptaoCav
6 months ago
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Yeah... the story starts great, it's a fanfic where the MC is a Mary Sue, so of course she's gonna be gifted at pretty much everything, from archery to martial arts, to business management and engineering, but at least they have a reason for it, it's not the greatest reason, but it can work. Also, she does take 6 months of training at the beginning and only becomes a match for catwoman, Batman can still beat her, which is more time than many such fanfics can say about their MC's. So, all in all, about 40 or 50 enjoyable chapters, not the greatest thing in the world, but good. Then we get to the Gotham arc and things change. EVERY, SINGLE. CHARACTER, seems to be fighting to hold the idiot ball. The author wanted the MC to solve problems so, every time there's a problem, no mater what, the MC is the one that will solve it, no matter where she, how long it takes, or how stupid the other characters have to be for her to solve. THe story tries to use humor to mask everyone's incompetency around the MC, but it doesn't land very well with me. People being stupid once or twice so the MC can look good I can stand, doing it every single chapter for more than 50 chapters is a little too much. In short, the MC is the greatest, she's a prodigy in anithing she tries and, to make her look good, whenever people are around her, their skills and IQ go down by 50% or more... it's almost like she has a debuff aura or something.

  • Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm) original

    Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

    Movies ACTION SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED ANTIHERO URBAN RIGHTEOUS

    4.79

    Darth Vader dies in the arms of his son, having killed his master and gone back to the light side of the Force. And then he wakes up, finding himself into a little primitive planet that hasn't even achieved interstellar travel, where the government is corrupt and the heroes are ineffective, in a city that could almost be called a hive of scum and villainy, dominated by a gang that calls itself the Empire 88 and another that practices slavery. He wants to be better, he wants to overcome his past, but damn, the city REALLY isn't making it easy for him. Sometimes, a former Sith Lord just wants to force choke a bitch

    32 Chs 1.9k Collections

  • Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ) original

    Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION R18 SUPERPOWERS ISEKAI DC

    4.18

    Kara lived the first part of her life entirely unaware she had once been someone else. but, after failling to escape from krypton, the trauma of getting trapped in a ship makes her fully remember her previous life,. now she must strugle with two sets of memories and make sure her little cousin is gonna be ok, knowing everything the DC universe can throw at her she knows even being a Kryptonian won't be enough. _________________________________________________________ The world is mostly Young Justice but I won't deal with the team all that much. MC starts in a rought spot but it gets better from there. If you want to support me or allow me to do faster updates please leave a tip on: patreon.com/CapCaverna

    70 Chs 6.5k Collections

  • Dungeon Delving is damn HARD! (Danmachi/Naruto) original

    Dungeon Delving is damn HARD! (Danmachi/Naruto)

    Anime & Comics ISEKAI NARUTO DANMACHI

    4.25

    Having been an antisocial nerd his entire life Roland Sinclair had just started getting out of his shell and having a little fun when his life came to a very sudden end, thankfully his death was amusing enough to atract the attention of a ROB and he got sent into the world of DanMachi. With limited knowledge of the plot and setting but having read a lot about mythology he decides he'd best avoid sex ofenders, incestuous and often apocalipse bringing deities and spend his second chance at life exploring the dungeon and the wonders of magic he had always daydreamed about... now, if only he could manage his growing addrenaline addiction and the unwanted attention of a wine god, he may even survive long enought to enjoy it. WARNING: Updates will be very slow, I'm focusing on my other fanfics and it may take one or two months for each chapter.

    21 Chs 1.8k Collections

  • Reincarnated into a hentai world original

    Reincarnated into a hentai world

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE R18 HAREM SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION ANTIHERO SMUT ECCHI RIGHTEOUS

    3.86

    EDIT: CURRENTLY ON HIATUS - WILL CONTINUE... EVENTUALLY Joshua hates NTR, he hates rapist uggly bastards ruining his masturbating sessions so, when he gets reincarnated into a world which is a mixture of various hentais he had read in his life with a superpower he choose he knows just what to do. Have as much sex as he wants and brutally murder all those damn uggly bastars! WARNING! Sometimes the MC doesn't arive on time to prevent every bad thing from hapenning, those times it's more about him helping with recovery, those times the girl he's saving is a complete stranger until that point. Ugh, do people even know what NTR means? Do they even read the damn fic before rating? Cuz there's no fucking NTR in my fic, none of the MC's girls get stolen or abused. If you want more or faster updates, think about giving me some support on pa treon.com/CapCaverna (just delete the space between the words)

    22 Chs 7.9k Collections

  • Welcome to the system! original

    Welcome to the system!

    Urban ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM SUPERPOWERS SURVIVAL ANTIHERO LEVELUP APOCALYPSE

    For most the system came out of nowhere, creatures out of fairytale invaded the world killing and enslaving all they could find but the government knew... and was prepared. As the monsters came the army reacted, turning cities into war zones and survivors into assets they hope to keep a semblance of justice into this new world. Aaron Ross is a menber of Ragnarok, one of the many gifted man and woman trained from birth to become loyal heroes, to lead the US when the system came, unfortunately he is not the savior they want, instead he could be the killer they need. This story has a lot of profanity and gore but won't have any smut. Updated once a day for a month, this is one of my old stories I'm just getting back on writing. The image used isn't mine but found on the internet and I'll take it down if requested.

    16 Chs 49 Collections

  • Dying in the multiverse (Multicross SI) original

    Dying in the multiverse (Multicross SI)

    Others REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION SURVIVAL ISEKAI

    An asshole ROB decides it's amusing to watch people die in many different ways so he choose an average guy to do it, refusing to make him OP he lets the guy choose some advantages while imposing some disadvantages before sending him into many worlds. Or, an average guy trying to survive in fictional worlds without a lot of plot armor. WARNING! Updates once a day until it hits 8 chapters, after that updates will be very irregular

    8 Chs 127 Collections

  • Rise of the Senju original

    Rise of the Senju

    Anime & Comics R18 NARUTO ECCHI

    WARNING: NOT CURRENTLY UPDATING! After a drunk one night-stand Tsunade Senju finds herself pregnant, the elemental nations will never be the same again... Being reborn into the elemental nations was far from being the ideal situation for Kazuki Senju. Toddlers being trained by the military to become preteen soldiers and expected to die before reaching adulthood is all well and good in a manga but, in real life, it is just unacceptable. Unable to see children becoming killing machines Kazuki decides he'd follow his great grandfather's footsteps, Hashirama Senju made the warring states era obsolete, Kazuki is gonna make the Hidden village's era obsolete or die trying and, with his cheat of a bloodline, he may even manage it. After losing everyone she ever cared about in life Tsunade finaly managed to find some happiness in her new son and no one, absolutly NO ONE, is gonna take it away from her! She's gonna make sure of it even if she needs to surpass her grandfather to do so.

    5 Chs 825 Collections