Kaiser wasn't there, Hookwolf was defeated early on, he tried to jump Anakin, but Anakin just grabbed him midair, crushed his wolf shape into a ball and then used him as a projectile against one of the Giant twins.
There's still the Merchants, the Undersiders, Circus, and a few other independents.
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Haven't posted it yet
So... Turns out I couldn't write for a few days, then had a complete blank for both of my FF, I did manage to write a few pages for my original story and get started on another Naruto FF I've in my head, but, for the life of me I couldn't think of how to write the chapters for Supergirl or Will.
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I mean, the battle started and Anakin imediately used force speed to try and flee, Everything was moving at the speeds of a speeding car.
Unfortunately, things had happened too fast, their miscalculation became clear and the order to disengage was given less than 40 seconds into the battle but, by then, Susanoo had already captured Armsmaster and was about to murder him.
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Ugh, ended up being 3 days, sorry about that
Finishing it soon, give me a day or two.
Nevermind, going into the chapter editor it was messed but, see if it's fixed now
Kal-El's body tensed and quivered as wave after wave surged through it, his muscles locking in place and a small groan escaping his lips.
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What? But it looks just fine on the browser and mobile when I check?
Kal-El's body tensed and quivered as wave after wave surged through it, his muscles locking in place and a small groan escaping his lips.
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I actually share some of those feelings, I don't really enjoy reading a story where this plot point keeps coming up and, usually, heavily prefer when the MC never reveals it. I wasn't planning on revealing her past life, or even mentioning it too often in this fic because, despite her rebirth, she IS Kara Zor-El... far more than she is her past self. Unfortunately, I'm also a discovery writer and, as I was writing this chapter (and a few before it) things naturally progressed towards this point. I could, with a lot of work, write this out of the story, but it just felt like something THIS Kara would worry about and coming out something she would do, an evolution of her mental state. . Still... I completely understand your frustration.
"Right, well, I actually remember a different life, one where everything here was simply an animated series…"
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Yeah... the story starts great, it's a fanfic where the MC is a Mary Sue, so of course she's gonna be gifted at pretty much everything, from archery to martial arts, to business management and engineering, but at least they have a reason for it, it's not the greatest reason, but it can work. Also, she does take 6 months of training at the beginning and only becomes a match for catwoman, Batman can still beat her, which is more time than many such fanfics can say about their MC's. So, all in all, about 40 or 50 enjoyable chapters, not the greatest thing in the world, but good. Then we get to the Gotham arc and things change. EVERY, SINGLE. CHARACTER, seems to be fighting to hold the idiot ball. The author wanted the MC to solve problems so, every time there's a problem, no mater what, the MC is the one that will solve it, no matter where she, how long it takes, or how stupid the other characters have to be for her to solve. THe story tries to use humor to mask everyone's incompetency around the MC, but it doesn't land very well with me. People being stupid once or twice so the MC can look good I can stand, doing it every single chapter for more than 50 chapters is a little too much. In short, the MC is the greatest, she's a prodigy in anithing she tries and, to make her look good, whenever people are around her, their skills and IQ go down by 50% or more... it's almost like she has a debuff aura or something.
Also, because of how bad trying to fight Anakin went, Purity and one other escaped, then there's Kayser who didn't fight and Night and Fog, who faced Anakin on an earlier fight, but managed to retreat.
Holy shit, I just watched the videos, the guy just flicked that woman away, then threw Hookwolf at the giant woman! He's giving a whole new definition to the phrase, 'hitting a motherfu*** with another motherfu…'
Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)
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