KlopsKLDP

okay

Author, will there be a new chapter this week? Or will there just be no chapter for a while?

No man, for me the problem is not Darwin's death, I expressed myself badly when writing due to the disappointment of the chapter. It's like this, I'm not a fan of stories with a typically evil villain like the protagonist, who has a hunger to kill innocent people and become this hidden psychopath that he has inside himself. That's why I'm dropping the story, dark villains are not my thing to read, I'm attracted as much by the name of the story as by the cover, that's what drew me to the story. I hope you can understand that this is my thing, bye.

Sorry, but I'm not willing to read a story that seems like a generic villain (I'm not a fan of villains being the protagonist) and it seems to me that the protagonist is still racist, I don't really know why the first mutant to be encountered is Dwarvin or the lines, but it seems to me something very racist in the story, so I'm leaving, I hope you can be successful with the translation. Bye, see you later.

Of course you don't have to follow my ideas, I just thought it would be interesting to share.

I also thought that he wouldn't gain any powers from whoever he had sex with (except for certain people who would have the gift of transmitting their powers), this could be remedied with the solution of Rouge sharing her power temporarily with the protagonist and her evolution allowing it to become permanent. Or with the improvement of his mind, he could unlock psychic powers, precisely this being the decisive factor in how powers like Jean, Emma or Professor's work.

A small idea: He could gradually gain resistance to powers as they are used on him. For example: since Emma managed to invade his mind, this would allow his mental defenses to improve; Or even with Rougue, his power being the copy, this would allow him to have an immune system or skin more resistant to this type of copy. (Of course, it would be something gradual, something like what he receives from his training, this could allow him to resist elemental powers, magic, cosmic and other varieties, being more immune to various powers.)

Second: That our protagonist would, through sexual practice, share small improvements (not something very strong, but gradually improving as his power improves).