NuggerNaut

Unfortunate that this lazy and insanely predictable plot point is coming to fruition. Anyone still here remember his amazing reason on not closing the DIABLO rift when he encountered it? His reason for not closing a portal to the literal hell dimension was that it wouldn't be a problem for a few years. (Dont worry our MC immediately closes other rifts that pose ZERO threat IMMEDIATELY) That's it, that's the whole reason this entire plot point and future arc is happening. I said it was lazy and predictable then, it's even more so now.

Join a club/sect and learn Qi/cultivation. What novel am I reading again? Wasn't this a Pokémon farming novel?

I can see you care deeply about my use of S.I., I can assure you it's for entertainment purposes and not a delusional escape from reality. In fact it aids me greatly in my enjoyment and persistence in reading a novel. If a person told me they were reading a book but they have taken away all their personal feelings about it, I would ask them; why are you reading it then? For school? For work? I dont like that a character we've come to know, is in fact 100% completely different after he's ingested (quite literally) a single drink of alcohol. It's an overused,nonsensical and lazy trope. He's not just a little silly, he didn't embarrass himself. He turned into a caricature. An exaggeration. I invest time into reading, I don't see the point in 'turning my brain off' or just 'letting go' and reading something that is clearly bad.

How much did the MC drink before he was an embarrassing blackout drunk? It's fine if you like this, but unfortunately for me I self-insert myself into novels I enjoy. And once a character is an absolute embarrassment, I lose interest. I dont mind some cringe (as stated before) but what about being an exaggerated caricature of a drunk?

It's weird that the MC doesn't just carry around translation seeds on him always. Everytime a Pokémon talks it's like the MC is reminded that he can't speak Pokémon and he needs to fetch some seeds. At what point when your surrounded by Pokémon you wish to communicate with EVERY SINGLE DAY, 24/7, would you just ALWAYS have some seeds with you.

A little unfortunate you turned the MC into a complete clown. The interactions with the bird were cringey but tolerable. These last two chapters really change the tone and image of the MC.

Why was the wizard king acting like he had never talked or even seen zoro before? Didn't he already have interactions with him earlier? Zoro even said he gave him a good fight? But now it's "I can tell it's zoro because of yami description"

So MC is just another yami, but with green hair and 3 swords instead of 1? If I remember the synopsis, he's a transmigrator pretending to be zoro? Not ACTUALLY zoro right? So this personality is supposed to be an earth (Chinese) soul in the black clover universe right?

I appreciate your authors note, but I think having any kind of large harem (4+) eventually turns the novel into a dating Sim FF. The harem is either 2D cutouts so as not it interfere with the story, OR inordinate amount of time is focused on minor character issues and advances so that the more interesting wider story as a whole is ignored.

Seems a bit contrived or forced. Maybe I just don't understand how INSANELY expensive and RARE there feathers must be. Otherwise who would go through all this hassle for a resource that they aren't in need for? (if I remember correctly, it for the EVOLVED version of that Pokémon making a hammer, otherwise regular metal scrap would work for the current weak version)