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2018-02-06 Joint Brazil
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8 hours ago
Commented

Good. I like the concept and would be glad to read more. However, this one shot is not enough for me to judge the quality of this story. It has a good beggining, but I need to see more of the worldbuilding, other characters, their interludes. So, post more. I would enjoy reading the next chapters.

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5 days ago
Commented

if changing from two to one chapter day makes u avoid burn out. Go for it. I like the novel and would prefer that it keep going.

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1 months ago
Posted

The story develop slowly. For me that's what makes this awesome, because instead of overpowered mcs from the start, we see one who develops himself and those around him. His growth and his actions are meaningful and build on themselfs to create an amazing story.

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5 months ago
Commented

dont kill ratata again, please...

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7 months ago
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More chapters, please.

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7 months ago
Posted

Pretty good plot in a already existing background, however the translation could improve and I personally dislike the use of third person narration that, sometimes, is used.

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11 months ago
Commented

Thanks

So made some changes, and now you can read this book five times a week. 

HP: Ronan's Journey

HP: Ronan's Journey

Book&Literature · YashVardhan_OG

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1 years ago
Commented

any chance of a mass release coming soon?

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2 years ago
Commented

loving it, so far