CalistormX

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Just a avid reader

2018-01-20 Joint Global
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CalistormX
CalistormX
CalistormX
1 months ago
Commented

don't unlock the next chapter, paragraphs in it are all jumbled.

CalistormX
CalistormX
1 months ago
Commented

Paragraphs in this chapter are fully jumbled. Good luck trying to make sense of order.

CalistormX
CalistormX
1 months ago
Posted

My first question is, shouldn't this be in the fan fiction section. (Mainly set in the world of Marvel and have a setting in Cyberpunk 2077) At this moment I have read only free chapters, story itself is pretty interesting and engaging, The main character is more of neutral character, until this moment he doesn't seem to be too much of a goody two shoes. It is a transmigration story, he died of radiation poisoning, and the bodies he took over have the same problem, so the main motivation of mc is to try to not die and recover from it. In the case of quality, in some instances translation seems to be mtl one, editing level do be high so it might not be as noticeable, way the story flows, in some places or seems to jump around, which threw me off. Nothing much to say about the world, it is both Marvel and Cyberpunk 2077(based on video game), so it is already there and people can find images on it as well.

CalistormX
CalistormX
2 months ago
Replied to Avarice_of_Greed

likely no human translator. Using ai mtl then editing, editor didn't do thorough checking

"Aren't you going to ask how I managed to secure a Grade A evaluation in the Ruin Realm?" Dharma Cultivation asked with interest.

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This Sword Cultivator is Somewhat Dependable

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CalistormX
CalistormX
5 months ago
Replied to Sky_eater

It won't pass the review by the game store boards. They have to approve the game first before it can be downloaded/bought by players

CalistormX
CalistormX
5 months ago
Replied to Vargr_the_Skald

The main thing causing the doubt for me is when the author uses 'she' instead of 'he' for one or many paragraphs, if it was just one or two instances, I can see it as a typo

CalistormX
CalistormX
5 months ago
Replied to Vargr_the_Skald

I have seen some mistakes with pronouns which makes me confused whether it is translated fanfic rather than what author claims

CalistormX
CalistormX
8 months ago
Replied to Joaoterminus3110

tbh, it does feel like that, but he does start actively interacting, as well as having his own struggles later own

CalistormX
CalistormX
8 months ago
Commented

Don't unlock the next chapter, it is costly but it is just the authors'rant