Honestly author, I hate that you changed the teams. You just made more work for yourself, because now you have changed so many dynamics like team names, leaders, team interactions and more. Also they're not even the main focus of the story so why?
I'm confused? chapter 1 said his power level was in the 700's now 80 is near his level? did you mean for it to be in the 70's in chapter 1?
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The Ape From Space
Anime & Comics · Warrior988
Well as long as the love interest isn't an OC im fine with any girl. Nothing is worse than an OC love interest when there are so many female characters to pick from.
I think I'll start trying out a bit of romance now that they are teenagers and it doesn't feel super creepy. But don't expect much; I have literally never been on a date before or had a girlfriend in real life, so if anyone has advice on what you find good in a romance, please comment.
Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash
Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana
and that soul piece became navi didn't it?
Abby once told me about a system user who tried to rape her, so she separated the soul fragment that represented that idiot's sexual pleasure and then sent that soul piece to an unknown part of the multiverse.
No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)
Anime & Comics · Bukaro
he better get a free affinity when tests his chakra affinities, because everyone has atleast 1 and he PAID for this extra 1
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seems a bit unfair. why does she get to use ice bending when he's not allowed lightning bending until the 4th round?
The ice wall cracked and cancelled the fire. It then turned liquid and it turned into a stream that headed at Chen, who ran to the side. As the water slid by him, he extended both of his fists. Hot purple fire gathered, creating a strong light. Using one of his newest associated skills with his level made him take a little bit of time. He was compressing fire into a soccer-sized ball.
Playing Firebending (Legend of Korra SI)
TV · blazuki
honestly I can see the MC being stronger than Jin-woo at the start but by the time Jin-woo inherits the full shadow monarchs powers I don't see how the MC can be stronger with the abilities he has and was granted. The Demon slayer abilities he has are strong in the demon slayer world but when crossed over to other worlds they can be lacking in comparison to other powers. Jin-woo powerful himself and can summon literally undying armies with all kinds of abilities, skills, weapons, and sizes. Jin-woo even ends up resetting the timeline by fighting and defeating the Big Bad's so the dungeons never appeared. when that happens what even happens to our MC?
good luck with your novel but Its not for me. I don't like the devil fruit power and the chapters are too short for my liking. I skipped ahead and they were still short.
when? so far the the mc was building hoping, then this random guy jumps up while he's in the air mid jump and stabs him with a knife. this "robber" has yet to even speak a word to the mc
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A Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)
Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
Did you not see the Harem tag? we get both and more
Peter although confused nodded his head but stopped halfway through 'It couldn't be, could it?'
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3