I was only comparing countries, nothing to do with continents. Also African continent is only less than twice as big as Russia.
The west wall cuts three to four kilometres into the enormous Silver Bark forest named after the silver bark oak trees native to that forest that lies on the western border of the Frost Swallow country. The forest is so massive that it is said to be atleast five times the size of the country which itself is close to twenty million square kilometres which is bigger than the biggest country back on earth, Russia. It is filled with dangerous swamps, chilling lakes, mountains, poisonous lands and many perilous places. It is even said to contain beasts equivalent to nascent soul realm cultivators in prowess. And ofcourse it contains many precious and rare resources and is frequented by many cultivators. The sect alse frequently sends expeditions into the forest. There are many missions in the Mission Hall that require one to enter the silver bark forest.
One Average Cultivator
Eastern · dss
An Average Cultivator is the original one. Copy pasted in the other one for a contest. Initially wanted to stop updating it after the contest but it's collections spiked after being featured. Now I'm not sure which one to continue with. The first one is sentiment, the second is a bit ahead in the race, which one do you think I should drop? I wanna stick with sentiment and get it contracted. What do you think?
Thanks for the review and don't worry he does get better.
There are many things wrong with his brain. Which do you mean?
Thanks for the feedback. The MC's supposed to be exactly like you described for the first part which I intended to end around chapter 15. I guess I got carried away writing and we'll have atleast 4 more chapters of loser mc. Sorry about that. I'll be careful in the future. He'll be much more reserved, quiet in the next part. You'll never see the loser mc again. Well, not this kind of irritating loser.
Yes, search urumi weapon on the net. I didn't want to use whip sword as it could be sectioned.
"I can't say. Senior sister Mu Peipei has her whole family supporting her. They have tool refiners that excel in making the ribbon sword. Senior brother Na on the other hand cannot afford to order non mainstream weapons."
One Average Cultivator
Eastern · dss
Being low key when weak is the logical thing to do. The first chapter his fear and logic spoke. Mainly fear. This time he lost his logic and fear to the excitement that he felt when an MC crushes everyone with his money in auctions. The mc right now is a fickle minded, impulsive, weak willed fellow. His character will grow as the novel moves forward. I realise this scene could've been done better but I just couldn't get the words. I am working on my writing and will soon get it up to standard. Keep pointing out my mistakes till then. Thanks!
Zhang Wuji was covered with sweat. His outer robe lost somewhere in the mess. He took a final deep breath and threw himself on the bed. He did not even care about the mess on it. 'Why did I have to bid 6 gold? That is 1 year's pocket money. I did not even want to bid that amount. It just happened involuntarily. Haah fuck it, there's nothing I can do now. Might as well take the pill and sleep. I'll deal with the mess tomorrow.'
One Average Cultivator
Eastern · dss
He is under the delusion that like all transmigration novels, he will get some cheat and rule the world. He is the main character and superior to all others. But in reality he still is insecure, impulsive and all that he was previously. The mix lead to doing or saying some stuff and regretting when it backfires. I hope it makes sense.
"You... I... you just wait. When I reach qi condensation I'll make you kneel and beg for mercy."
One Average Cultivator
Eastern · dss
I realise it may be slow without a cheat so how about this wait a month for the chapters to accumulate and then read. By then I will have the mc ready and it would be a pure cultivation novel.
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original An Average Cultivator
As a kid in the world of giants, under the protection of others, life is spent in learning and growing to become a giant. As an adult one is in constant conflict with the world trying to make one's own individual space. But before one manages to carve out their place in the world, they are weighed down by their responsibility. After decades of being responsible one is old and weak, living in constant fear that the world they built their whole life might find them inadequate and useless. As they live in constant fear, they are then surprised by the ever present inevitable death. All the fear, passion, anxiety, attachment.. life, what was the point of it all? One never has the time to stop and ask themselves that in their routine. Lost in the worlds they themselves built, lost in their obsessions, forgetting the world that is the truth, they fall into delusion. If they ever realize the state they are in, a fear greater than the fear of death grips them. They fear of their lives crumbling in front of them. The knowledge of one's ignorance, though opens a path for true knowledge, is the most dreadful indeed. Whether they hide back in their shells at that point or search for the truth and take their first step in this journey called life marks the difference between the wise and the foolish. A modern underachiever earthling finds himself in a cultivation world similar to the ones he read in novels. A world where killing is common. A terrifying world. How different is the life of a cultivator compared to a mortal's? How magical is it really? Follow Zhang Wuji as he experiences all flavors of life and grows in the world of cultivation as one of the many average cultivators with no system, no cheat.61 Chs 54 Collections
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One Average Cultivator
A modern underachiever earthling finds himself in a cultivation world similar to the ones he read in novels. A world where killing is common. A terrifying world. How different is the life of a cultivator compared to a mortal's? How magical is it really? Follow Zhang Wuji as he experiences all flavours of life and grows in the world of cultivation as one of the many average cultivators with no system no cheat.49 Chs 55 Collections
Thanks for the review! Also thanks for the idea. I never read realistic fiction, reading some would help me write better.
One Average Cultivator
Eastern · dss