The repetition of losses mother, grandmother, friends, clansmen reflects Uchiha Izumi’s overwhelming grief and desperation, which are crucial to her character. Trimming this would strip away the emotional depth and build-up needed to convey her resolve for revenge. In Japanese and Chinese storytelling, repetition is often used to convey emotional weight and intensity. Instead of aiming for brevity, characters may repeat certain words or phrases to emphasize how deeply they feel or how significant an event is. This style reflects the idea that strong emotions like grief, anger, or determination aren’t easily summed up in a few words. For example, when Uchiha Izumi lists all the people they’ve lost, the repetition serves to show her overwhelming pain and how each loss compounds the others. It also mirrors real-life emotional outbursts, where people might express themselves in a repetitive way because their emotions are too intense for neatly structured speech. While some readers prefer concise dialogue, not every scene should prioritize brevity, especially those dealing with trauma.
"Our mother is dead, our grandmother is dead, our friends are dead, our clansmen are dead. If we don't avenge them, what purpose do we have in living?" Uchiha Izumi, eyes red with tears, glared at Itachi, speaking each word with resolve.
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While it's true that Akira Toriyama mentioned S-cells in an interview as a requirement for the Super Saiyan transformation, it doesn't contradict the role of emotions. Emotions, particularly intense anger, are the trigger for activating the S-cells, which allow the transformation. Saiyans need a sufficient number of S-cells to transform, but emotional intensity plays a critical role in activating them. Moreover, most documented transformations in the series, including Goku and Vegeta’s, occur in response to extreme emotional states, reinforcing the traditional narrative that emotions are crucial.
"That was the Super Saiyan transformation, a form that Saiyans with the Saiyan bloodline can achieve. It requires mastering extreme anger or extreme emotions to reach this state."
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Imagine being so irrelevant that your idea of a "protest" is whining in someone else’s book review section like a bored 12-year-old who just discovered the internet. You spent two whole minutes writing something that took zero brainpower? That’s painfully obvious because your comment couldn’t have been more useless if you’d written it on a sticky note and stuck it to your forehead. A “protest” is supposed to actually achieve something. All you did was flex your inability to form a coherent thought. If half-assed trolling is your way of getting attention, you might want to consider a new hobby, because this one is tragic.
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Just when I think I’ve hit the lowest depths of fanfic trash, another vile monstrosity crawls out from the sludge to prove me wrong. These writers must have IQs so low they’re not even measurable by human standards—how else could they create something this appalling? It's like they mash their faces into the keyboard, hoping sheer randomness will form a coherent story. Spoiler: it doesn't. Are they deliberately writing this garbage, or is it just the byproduct of their brain cells struggling to function? Honestly, even a brainless, rotting corpse could crank out better stories than these atrocities. Reading this drivel is like enduring an assault on my intelligence, leaving me wondering if their only goal was to see how far they could set the bar below absolute zero. The only thing worse than their writing is the fact they have the audacity to share it with the world.
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The original raw story is still incomplete, and I’m unsure if Granola will be included in it.
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If this story is so beneath you, why are you spending so much time breaking it down? Newsflash: just because you don’t get the nuances doesn’t make it 'stupid' it makes you look like someone who skimmed the whole thing while missing the point entirely. And what’s this about Broly’s bloodline? You really think throwing around a name like that makes you sound smart? It’s called 'suspense,' something you’d understand if you were more than just a surface level reader.
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original Dragon Ball: Collaborating with Frieza to Destroy Planet Vegeta
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[Exhilarating] + [Not Mindless] + [Consistent Power Levels] After waking up one day, Mu Chuan finds himself in the Dragon Ball world and acquires a sign-in system. Ding! Sign-in successful! Reward: Zarbon's Transformation Skill. Ding! Sign-in successful! Reward: Frost Demon Bloodline. Ding! Sign-in successful! Reward: Infinite Energy. Since obtaining the sign-in system, Mu Chuan has embarked on a path completely unrelated to the Saiyans... Original Work: 龍珠：夥同弗利薩毀滅貝吉塔行星 Author: 乞丐畫師 (Beggar Painter) Translation by: Craxx Support My Work: If you enjoy this translation and want to read advance chapters, consider subscribing to my Patreon at Patreon.com/CraxxTranslation. Your support helps me continue bringing you good translations. Disclaimer: This is a fan translation of the original work 龍珠：夥同弗利薩毀滅貝吉塔行星 All characters, settings, and the original story belong to their respective creators. This translation is done purely for entertainment purposes and not for commercial gain. Support the Original Author: If you enjoy this story, please consider supporting 乞丐畫師 (Beggar Painter) by engaging with it through official channels. Your support for the original author helps ensure that more great stories like this one continue to be created.101 Chs 390 Collections
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Naruto: I Confronted the Five Kage Before the System Arrived
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Hagoromo Gengetsu traveled to the Naruto world and became a significant figure in the shinobi world through his own efforts. However, one day, the newly appointed Five Kage joined forces and launched a surprise attack on him, abandoning all ethics. It was only then that a system finally appeared, claiming it could help him become the strongest in the shinobi world. But... Just as Hagoromo Gengetsu was about to confront the Five Kage, he looked at the system's first mission in silence. [Shinobi School Counterattack Activated! Defeat your dead-last classmate, Uzumaki Naruto.] "System, do you even know what year it is?" [Konoha Year 60] "It's Konoha Year 2 right now! What's wrong with this system?!" ... Years later, Hagoromo Gengetsu opened his eyes again, standing on the rooftop during the Chunin Exams. He looked at the Third Hokage, who was on high alert in front of him, and a slight smile appeared on his lips: "Though it's a few decades early, I made it just in time." Original Work: 忍界：我都硬剛五影了，系統才來 Author: 寒武光 (Cambrian Light) Translation by: Craxx Support My Work: If you enjoy this translation and want to read advance chapters, consider subscribing to my Patreon at Patreon.com/CraxxTranslation. Your support helps me continue bringing you good translations. Disclaimer: This is a fan translation of the original work 忍界：我都硬剛五影了，系統才來. All characters, settings, and the original story belong to their respective creators. This translation is done purely for entertainment purposes and not for commercial gain. Support the Original Author: If you enjoy this story, please consider supporting 寒武光 (Cambrian Light) by engaging with it through official channels. Your support for the original author helps ensure that more great stories like this one continue to be created.207 Chs 1k Collections
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Simultaneous Transmigration: From Japanese Anime to American Comics
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Alternative Title: Simultaneous Transmigration: From Japanese Anime to American Comics, Striking With Heavy Blows! A mysterious Soul Palace transports Chu Yang to countless worlds. In every world, Chu Yang can share his talents. He is the young clan leader of the Senju Clan in the world of Naruto, chosen by the God of Shinobi himself. In the world of One Piece, he is the right hand man of Shanks, one of the Four Emperors, the strongest vice captain in history, and the first to reverse bounty the Celestial Dragons. He is Aizen's lifelong nemesis in the world of Bleach and Tony Stark's genius assistant in the Marvel universe. In the world of martial arts, he is the number one demon lord sweeping across all lands, and in the world of Jujutsu Kaisen, he is the mad sorcerer trampling on Sukuna. He is the chosen one and will ultimately become the supreme one. Original Work: 同時穿越：從日漫到美漫重拳出擊 Author: 我隻想萬定 (I Only Want Ten Thousand Orders) Translation by: Craxx Support My Work: If you enjoy this translation and want to read advance chapters, consider subscribing to my Patreon at Patreon.com/CraxxTranslation. Your support helps me continue bringing you good translations. Disclaimer: This is a fan translation of the original work 同時穿越：從日漫到美漫重拳出擊. All characters, settings, and the original story belong to their respective creators. This translation is done purely for entertainment purposes and not for commercial gain. Support the Original Author: If you enjoy this story, please consider supporting 我隻想萬定 (I Only Want Ten Thousand Orders) by engaging with it through official channels. Your support for the original author helps ensure that more great stories like this one continue to be created.50 Chs 273 Collections
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Naruto: I, Uchiha, Just Want to Die
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Reborn as a member of the Uchiha clan, Uchiha Ci has no intention of saving his clan, he just wants to fake his death, collect his insurance and go home. Conveniently, the Third Shinobi World War is raging! Uchiha Ci is sent on a mission to the Land of Hot Water. He figures that in this dangerous era, dying shouldn’t be too difficult. But soon, he furrows his brow and realizes things aren’t that simple... --- Leader of the Jashin Cult: "Damn it, God! I've never seen an Uchiha laughing maniacally while being sacrificed on the altar." Uchiha Obito: "Big brother fought through fire and lightning, slashed through Kannabi Bridge, and stormed into the Iwagakure encampment just to save me! I’m tearing up!" Ōnoki: "I brought ten thousand men to gang up on the Raikage, and now what in the hell are we surrounding?" Uchiha Ci: "Damn, I just wanted to die honorably. Why is it so difficult?" Original Work: 木叶：我宇智波，只想作死 Author: 迷失之卷 (Lost Volume) Translation by: Craxx Support My Work: If you enjoy this translation and want to read advance chapters, consider subscribing to my Patreon at Patreon.com/CraxxTranslation. Your support helps me continue bringing you good translations. Disclaimer: This is a fan translation of the original work 木叶：我宇智波，只想作死. All characters, settings, and the original story belong to their respective creators. This translation is done purely for entertainment purposes and not for commercial gain. Support the Original Author: If you enjoy this story, please consider supporting 迷失之卷 (Lost Volume) by engaging with it through official channels. Your support for the original author helps ensure that more great stories like this one continue to be created.60 Chs 380 Collections
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Golden List Live: I Really Can't Hide Anymore!
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Ye Tian crossed into the Naruto world with a deduction system, easily deducing any abilities from various anime. He casually trained several pets, bringing forth characters like Kumoko, Beerus, Fox Spirit Honghong, Fox Spirit Yaya, Fox Spirit Rongrong, and Godzilla. The weapons he casually crafted surpassed those of the Six Paths Sage of the Ninja World, and he established one mysterious force after another. His own strength even exceeded that of Kaguya Ōtsutsuki. Until one day, a livestream appeared, revealing all the Taijutsu, weapons, pets, and dōjutsu to the entire Ninja World. At this moment, the low-key and hidden Ye Tian was exposed! It turned out that he was the greatest mysterious big boss of the Ninja World!!! Original Work: 金榜直播：我真的苟不住了！ Author: 忍界第一神 (The First God in the Ninja World) Translation by: Craxx Support My Work: If you enjoy this translation and want to read advance chapters, consider subscribing to my Patreon at Patreon.com/CraxxTranslation. Your support helps me continue bringing you good translations. Disclaimer: This is a fan translation of the original work 金榜直播：我真的苟不住了! All characters, settings, and the original story belong to their respective creators. This translation is done purely for entertainment purposes and not for commercial gain. Support the Original Author: If you enjoy this story, please consider supporting 忍界第一神 (The First God in the Ninja World) by engaging with it through official channels. Your support for the original author helps ensure that more great stories like this one continue to be created.318 Chs 1.2k Collections
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Naruto: Creating Immortal Techniques at Six, Shocking Uncle Snake
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Ishihara transmigrates into the Naruto world, awakening extraordinary comprehension, only to find himself abandoned as an infant. By chance, the rogue ninja Orochimaru passes by and takes him as a disciple. From then on, under Orochimaru’s guidance, Ishihara, with his extraordinary comprehension, embarks on a path to immortality. Observing numerous genjutsu, you create the Crystal Visualization Method. Studying the corpses of the Uchiha clan and the Sharingan, you develop the Sharingan Training Method. Researching the cells of the First Hokage, you invent the Wood Release Training Method. Delving into the secret technique of Living Corpse Reincarnation, you create the Perfect Possession Technique. Studying senjutsu and natural energy, you conceive the Sage Art: Sage Body Refinement Method. Observing the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path, you create the Physical Immortality Technique. Examining Kaguya Otsutsuki’s body, you devise the Immortal Eternal Life Technique. Comprehending the principles, training, refining, and imparting techniques, Ishihara’s path to immortality leads to the distortion of the entire world! Original Work: 悟性逆天，六岁创仙法，震惊蛇叔 Author: 梦入洪荒 (Dreaming of the Wilderness) Translation by: Craxx Support My Work: If you enjoy this translation and want to read advance chapters, consider subscribing to my Patreon at Patreon.com/CraxxTranslation. Your support helps me continue bringing you good translations. Disclaimer: This is a fan translation of the original work 悟性逆天，六岁创仙法，震惊蛇叔 All characters, settings, and the original story belong to their respective creators. This translation is done purely for entertainment purposes and not for commercial gain. Support the Original Author: If you enjoy this story, please consider supporting 梦入洪荒 (Dreaming of the Wilderness) by engaging with it through official channels. Your support for the original author helps ensure that more great stories like this one continue to be created.95 Chs 1.5k Collections
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Golden List Live: I Really Can't Hide Anymore!
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