TL;DR: Great stories and storytelling, quality writing. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your short stories. I enjoyed both of them. I found them both very well written and mistake-free (which is very important to me as an editor). I liked the diverse vocabulary usage which made both stories more vibrant and expressive. The storytelling is very interesting and appropriate for both short stories that were published at the time of this review. I don't want to go into too much detail on the stories themselves, but I particularly enjoyed the message that "Christmas Rollercoaster" conveys. It is a very heart-warming story that is very fitting for this time of the year :) Overall, this is a good read and I definitely recommend reading it
Shameless author here! Well what can I say about this story, nothing much except that I've taken up many inspirations from well knowns webnovels. I promise a somewhat regular stability of update, at least until the end of book 1. Also I've been away from writing for a few years so excuse the subpar grammar and syntax, I'll do my best to edit it on the run. Have a good read and enjoy the journey!
Melody Of Life
Fantasy · LividEdge