I've been waiting for you, glad you made it. Since you're here now, why don't you stay... forever.
2017-07-27 Joint Global
The end thing on the car, is called spoiler. it's a pun
"Who should I give it to?" Ace whispered.
Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne
NANI DID YOU EAT THE GOMU GOMU NO MI???!
Ehem, hand over your stones or else🔫
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Bonney fought while asking about pizzas. She didn't want to finish the fight before she was sure that there were no pizzas here.
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Haki is the greatest power in one piece, but it isn't all powerful. There are devil fruits abilities that can actually bypass Haki. For example, Kaidou's devil fruit abilities gave him such a physique that even armament Haki couldn't harm him anymore. Only the advanced type where you destroy things from the inside, was it possible. and only a handful people knew that type. So he was in a sense indestructible for real. Now imagine if Big Mom had eaten that fruit, she'd be immortal for real
Sure they were important characters in One Piece but it was clear that Haki ruled over all. Devil fruits were simply a shortcut to power, downside being the user can rely on them too much as well as being unable to swim. Now, I'm no Einstein but unless you somehow get the ability to fly, being not able to swim in a world full of water is a huge weakness.
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Shorter than a dwarf nearly a gnome 😨😨😨
Also something I forgot to mention, my current body was oddly similar to mine on Earth, slim build, 5'8 slightly tanned skin and black hair. Nothing special but nothing that restricts me so I guess I shouldn't complain.
Anime & Comics · Pzero
Well there's three theories that the scientists have come up with. The first is that he had a black ancestor, ans that it was DNA at play here. the second theory is that the flame abilities burnt his hand. And the third and least likely theory, is that his hand was infused with Haki
Suddenly Ace flashed towards Urouge and threw a punch straight at Urouge's face, and while the fist was traveling, it turned dark black.
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RIGHT HAHAHHA! I was so tired when I wrote this part so I kept looking at my elbow while whispering Armbow? I felt like I was saying something wrong but my brain couldn't realise what it did wrong. I kept whispering Armbow feeling that it was somehow wrong
Ace simply hit backwards with his arm bow.
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That's actually a fan theory, which I agree with. but such a thing has never been confirmed. There's another fan theory that the colour depends on how much Haki you infuse in your body parts, that's why we couldn't see Garp used it in early chapters since he only used a bit of it.
Ace's fist turned black as he punched Smoker in the gut so hard that he fell to his knees, holding his stomach.
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That means that I succeed in making characters that fit into One Piece. I chose unnamed background characters from canon, that only made an appearance once and never spoke. That way I could create an OC that existed in the story
After a minute of silence, the old man broke out laughing. "Chahahahah, to think that I, Jojo Pojo would be asked to sail under someone else's flag!" He laughed for a while.
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I understand your frustrations as a reader, I'm also a reader that has read 1981 books according to Webnovel. But now I'm going to explain the frustrations of an author. first frustrations, Readers that complain about details that they missed because they either read too fast or skipped sentences, or aren't focused. Second frustration, the arrogance of readers who think they understood the original work better than everyone else. there are some things that aren't made clear in canon, and there's different understanding regarding those things. I did certain things based on knowledge gained after rereading the story and studying so that I can follow the truth of the one Piece world. then there are things that can only be speculated, and in that case I decided on things that would fit my story. Then there's the third frustration, readers who complain about something not knowing that it is canon or that it's not made clear in canon. congrats, you hit all three in just a few complaints. regarding your complaints about Ace's strength and growth, reread the story once again, a bit more closely and you'll see that Ace in this story has already become one of the strongest before the training. the training was mostly done to train his crew. Hancocks's original strength is up to speculation as we haven't really seen her in fights except for with Blackbeard. in marineford we barley saw her fight. but then there's the fact that multiple strong people such as Aokiji, Sengoku and Blackbeard have been very wary of her strength. so it's all based on assumption. I decided that it would make more sense if she was closer to admiral level since she had three hakis's and is the strongest warrior of Amazon Lily where everyone is a strong warrior who knows two types of Haki. this was my own understanding and I went with it since there was nothing in canon to disprove this. I forgot the rest of your complaints, but I'll advise you to take care of your health, don't read this if it's making you angry or stressed. don't read it if it's too frustrating for you, go out and take a walk instead. or read other books, there are many books that are written by authors much greater I. For example, Lion King:son of Mufasa, or Marvelous Superman, Naruto: clan of shinobi those are the peak of all fanfics
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I also wonder that sometimes, Try looking inside a barrel or behind a tree. It's also possible that he hid himself beneath the ground.
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Don't be gae, Dressrosa is gae, so we need to hurry past it
Chapter 41. Weird feeling
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No I wrote all of this by myself. English is the fourth language I learnt in life, so it might not be perfect at times.
You know what, I'm going to release this until there's 10 chapters left before the ending, then I'll drop it as revenge for all of you that didn't hand over your powerstones Mwahahhahahahhahaah
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She is actually close to admiral level in canon. Kuzan, Sengoku and Blackbeard all considered her to be an enemy to be wary of. and she is one of the few that has all three forms of Haki,no she's one of the people with the most potential. I think that all the new world people that got introduced early in the story were nerfed, such as crocodile, Hancock, Ace. even the Whitebeard pirates, when they were portrayed before the time skip they look much weaker compared to after the time skip. this is because Oda hadn't gotten the hang of powers along before the time skip. At least that's my perspective
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It may be a joke to you, but those reviews actually have an effect on my book. I spent a lot of time to write almost a 100k words for this book so far, I spent time editing and doing my best to get this book out. And it's not like I'm making any money out of it, it's purely for those that like one piece to enjoy the story from another point of view. Then comes you along and give me a 1 star for not having your Waifu in the crew? I usually delete 1 star reviews since it is usually those troll accounts that give everyone 1 stars. But I saw in your profile that you're not one for those so I won't delete, but I do ask that you at least give proper criticism in your review and not just dots, even if it is 1 star, if you think that ita worth that. although I think it's unfair, considering that the review is in 5 categories, and even if you think that the world background, character design and story development and writing quality is one star, I can confidently say that the updating stability is 5 stars, I stocked up 80 chapters so I could release 3-6 chapters everyday. I only ask that you're fair. I have released 58k words so far, and I still have like 50-60k in stock.
She won't actually be joining. She's not fated to be in his crew sadly. Nami is the only one from the original straw hats to join Demon Ace Pirates.
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Yes 😅 I also have Naruto fanfic so I accidentally write the wrong names sometimes, but luckily so far this is the only Naruto error I missed in the editing
They all looked in the direction their Captain looked, but they couldn't see anything, nor feel it with their chakra.
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hmph fine, I won't do it
You know what, I'm going to release this until there's 10 chapters left before the ending, then I'll drop it as revenge for all of you that didn't hand over your powerstones Mwahahhahahahhahaah
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I agree
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😱😨
Ehem, hand over your stones or else🔫
Fist Of Haki
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