Jaganathan

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Jaganathan
Jaganathan
1 years ago
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that's it? this should have been the continuation of the previous chapter. yet you divide the previous chapter and gave us two chapters. 🤷🤷🤷

Jaganathan
Jaganathan
1 years ago
Commented

correct me if I'm wrong. but aetholwolf is still a baby in body right? I mean, he just changed his appearance. but already he's getting married and everything 😅😅😅

Jaganathan
Jaganathan
2 years ago
Commented

this is the problem with webnovels, if u are taking so long to move from one arc to another with multiple breaks in between, we don't even know the backstory of this side character. although you have given an overview of his character, please mention it in a footnote of which chapter this happened, so that we will know the entire backstory instead of an overview. all things said I really like your story and wish you to finish it. how my suggestion helps in solving this issue.

Jaganathan
Jaganathan
2 years ago
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I mean, come on nearly 30 chapters just for a single fight, when u haven't even progressed your story that much. at least make some justifications at the end of this fight by giving him some op abilities.

Jaganathan
Jaganathan
2 years ago
Commented

it's getting too boring at this point of time

Jaganathan
Jaganathan
2 years ago
Commented

it's like the author wants to kill every known character in each arc and create new character for the upcoming arc.

Jaganathan
Jaganathan
Jaganathan
3 years ago
Commented

it's a replica of "kill the hero"

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Jaganathan
Jaganathan
3 years ago
Commented

add some male characters in the MC group. even his summoned creatures are female. you can create a harem but atleast add some more male characters