Whitebeard and that guy use the same type of weapon, it's called Bisento if I'm not mistaken
—"A spear? Oh darling, I didn't picture you as the type to use a spear!"
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I think not, just ramdons, I'm already tired of Mc with swords, even with a scythe it would look good but the spear seemed great to me.
—"A spear? Oh darling, I didn't picture you as the type to use a spear!"
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true, but I'm very new to writing so ignore that hahaha, I'll improve
—"Free you?" —he repeated, pretending to seriously consider the suggestion. He raised an eyebrow and looked at the prisoners one by one, as if evaluating them. —"Hmm… I don't think so. Why would I free a bunch of incompetents who couldn't even escape on their own?"
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a year with the MC being 29 years old and Hancock being 28
Now that you mention it, I started reading the chapter and found the mistake, it's a demo version that I made months ago, in a while I'll post the actual chapter that I personally wrote, apologies, I'm just getting started and I make silly mistakes.
This time I wrote it directly in English
I was typing without paying attention, I'll edit it later, thanks for pointing that out.
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I was typing without paying attention, I'll edit it later, thanks for pointing that out.
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I got distracted while writing
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original One Piece: The Navy Traitor
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In the dark depths of Impel Down, Alaric, an enigmatic twenty-nine-year-old former vice admiral, has been locked away for over a decade. With a history shrouded in mystery and a will that defies time, he has endured confinement in the world's most feared prison, waiting for the perfect moment to claim his freedom. When opportunity presents itself in the form of a daring infiltration led by the infamous Monkey D. Luffy, Alaric is faced with a crucial choice. Alaric must seize every moment to escape and defy his fate. In a rapidly changing world, his release could be the spark that ignites a new era. I am not a native English speaker, it is my third language, this is a Spanish story written by me in my spare time. The characters do not belong to me except my Mc. All rights belong to the creator of the work Oda16 Chs 3.6k Collections
Yeah. His spear also grows with him, my mistake in not specifying it
Alaric's height surged to 7'5", the crimson armor created by his Devil Fruit began to envelop his body, covering him from feet to neck, leaving only his face exposed. The armor vibrated with an almost palpable intensity, shining as if the blood itself gave it life.
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