Eternal2145

yea it's your typical face slaping however it is forced face slaping. it has no proper buildup up to the face slap, and 2/3 of the book are comments about the stuff going on

yes so the title is weird as hell and so is the book it's even weirder

ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.

P.s referring to current chapter count 572.

so I'm up to chapter 50ish it's not even been 2 full days in the book. so by my estimation the full book is 10 days. 😂. no but for real the book is crazy slow in development. and expands everything when it is not needed or explains the same thing with a different character or sometimes the same character.

the summary already has some contradictions idk about book.

so trash the system gives him all his wants. o need spirit stone, o i need spells. ECT i understand him doing some quest or something but too much "coincidences" is not ok. at least have him worki for the wants/ need instead of just handing them out.

it's reiterating the same thing over the span of several chapters. do not waste your time. the mc is a block head who doesn't know anything. also characters just accept what ever he changes like nothing.