Brilliant!
"I know, I've even got the right initals. Sirius Orion Black, also known as Son Of a Bitch."
Book&Literature · Sasha_zer
there is no try when you ask someone to abandon their engagement for someone not worth it and let's face it the MC is scum for treating every woman like that, and a straight down loser for knowing that and don't even bother changing it and yet having the gull to ask others to give him a chance, when chances are won and not given.
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Anime & Comics · Itachi101
another author that thinks and writes with his lower part. why don't you describe from the start in the synopsis that you just want slaves for your harem and that's it's just for your self wish-fulfilling and not just a story for a good read.
My training has come pretty far away from the time I had just started. I am still doing the Saitama exercise though however, I have made new abilities for me to grow even more powerful. There were even some abilities that would help my crew in their training like the teaching skill. It would let me teach someone any skills without wasting too much of my time. I gave one of my skills to her as well which was a downgraded version of Super Growth. I wanted her to grow but not to the level of mine. It was just a safety precaution. I would only give this skill to my future girls though not all of them. I would never tell them that I have given them skills otherwise they might tell it to someone else. I would though make them loyal to me.
Anime & Comics · BitchPleased
hell no!
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Anime & Comics · Paradox_
you did good! I actually feel like you filled an actual manga plot hole that always bugged me.
I doubt a ship like that of the Rocks Crew would remain standing with just Adam's Wood. After all they literally fought each other to the point of death for fun. So I added something to change it a bit.
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
+1
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So? what wrong with that? I seriously want to hear your opinion.
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the minimum I would consider someone as a god would be universe creation and not some measly planets...
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He means this one is waaayyy better, and honestly i understand him, DC just ain't ready for a good fanfic. You have done a very good work for this one Author but the other one is hmmm... In blunt words not a good one both in plot and character but most of all immersion and connectivity with the reader.