MaterSwordsmen

1yr

Commented

She was wearing a dark green V-neck shirt with a high-collared black leather jacket over it that showed her big bust. She also wears burgundy jeans with a silver chain drooping down over them, showing her curves too.

Issei's Redemption

Anime & Comics · some_writer

MaterSwordsmen

1yr

Commented

Maybe this?

Flapping its large wings in front of them, was a white snake-like creature that had blue stripes all around its body. The majestic creature from the top of its head to its tail could be around 30 feet long, at least 2 feet in width, its wingspan at least 25 feet. It was flapping its wings gracefully and had an angry look on its face, as it had its fangs out towards them.

000X000

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

MaterSwordsmen

3yr

Posted

The Plot is very interesting, even thought there were lot of comments about what author should do and should not do, it remains that he story writing did not change and that a good thing, i just hope this goes on because it has potential, and i hope its doesn't end rushed like other Dragon Ball z fanfic, there is a lot to be expanded upon like Battle of Gods and Super after the Z arc.