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Yet Another Ray With A System
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Synopsis
Yet another victim of Ray Elliot, Emperor of a multiverse. He return to the time of his transmigration just after his death and killed the ROB but in another parallel multiverse to change his parallel self fate just for fun.
His parallel self didn't take it too kindly though after all the abuse he have to face in the name of tutorial. He was thrown into a zombie infested world to be baptized by fire before starting his real multiverse transmigration.
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I'm bad at making synopsis but that's the gist of it.
(Disclaimer, My fic is trash. Don't read if dear reader dislike trash fics - Sincerely, Author.)
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Upload is not yet confirm since I made this at the spur of moment.
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Cover isn't mine, I just snag it from google.
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Also, whenever I ask for a vote. I wouldn't care anymore after the next chapter released because the decision already been made and change according the the votes would be incredibly bothersome and time consuming. (Sorry if this sound rude but some people are voting after the decision are made and they might have expectations that their choice will be followed. I have to clarify this to prevent some of them getting angry I didn't follow the vote anymore.)
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So, 200k words had passed and I think now is a good time to put a review. My own writing skill and quality is questionable at best. Most of the time is bad. Not straight trash but like less expressive and describing and more straight to point kind of writing because my vocabulary is small. Then my accuracy of characters is bad because I rely on my 8 years ago memories of animes I watch + fandom and other sites like youtube or reddit. My OC characters is bland because I'm not good at designing creative characters. For updates, I can't promise. sometime fast some time slow. Currently is fast because I have a lot of free time. Also another thing is I write for fun so I doubt there will be serious effort on my side to improve but I try because Im lazy. A Slothful Cat that turned to Daoist Cat but still a Lazy Cat.
This should be a good story to be honest, but unfortunately mc's attitude makes the reader angry and emotional, he is too easy to use by women and loli of course, I have Expectations were high at the start of the story but in that part of DxD it let me down, he became their slave. For those who don't like mc simp or harem don't read this.
Warhammer ref? Guns? Sci-fi Sh8t? Lolis? quite fun to read :D AND SO----- 5 Stars because why not it's good and enjoyable :D ---------------------------