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World First Paladin
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Synopsis
Ren Shizumu, 17 years old. A normal high school boy who lives a perfectly normal life... Well, not that normal as he's an introvert after all.
But all of that changes drastically when his friend Shin recommends a game to him. The game that calls Code Saga.
Not knowing that a click would soon change his life once and for all.
As Ren-
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Novel Name: Sekai-Hatsu No Paradin (World First Paladin)
[PG-17] [UPDATE SCHEDULE ON BOTTOM] [MTL]
[Scheldule]
10 PM EST- Days depends (Two chapters per week)
[Mass Release]
75PS - 2 Chapter on Sunday
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Authors Review:- Writting- I doubt it's great but I think it's readable. Updates- Kinda slow as I prioritize my novel first. (Once or Twice a week) Story- Can't say much as the story progresses as I write. Character- This! Probably not great but I do have some images of the character. Background- Hard to say as I doubt I managed to do that very well. It's there but not that great. Let's say that at least.
The writing quality is alright, besides the grammatical errors it shows promise in how the story develops, I also appreciate the bits which is simulating the game font at the beginning where he makes his choices. The story itself is just another game-based isekai, but based on how it develops it can grow interesting based on the systems utilized and story development. If you enjoy these game-based stories I'd recommend you picking it up, give it a shot ^-^ Other than that I will wait and see where the story goes and probably post a follow-up review at a later date.
4.0- A good read. As usual, the writing quality is fine. It's understandable but there's some grammar error... Updates, it's rather slow but I'm fine with that. Story, okay for me... Not sure for the other readers. I suppose there's a little bit improvement on the character design and the world background compare to the author previous work.